*new music from the kid* Poetic Artist- Hip Hop
 

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iight, beats coming in decent so far.....intros kinda bit long....

not feelin the hook...kinda sound like mugs from cypriss hill....

ur verse is a bit low...and quality kinda muffled....flows nice...kinda hard to hear what ur saying, but i like the message from what im hearing...hooks still ehhh....libs r nice here...lol slave ship line was kinda tupacish...delevery an't real strong...u should switch something up once in a while, cuz it seems repititivesomething to keep ppls attention nah mean?


not a bad track tho

intro needs to have something going on in it... or it doesn't work...


the hook is weak... just the way it was put together...


verse... a little low not a big deal... as far as content... it was pretty upfront and noticable... as well as abused by millions of people... not your fault it is what it is... I would rethink the hook basically... that's all... not a bad joint...

the hook is way to repetive but your flow is decent but you sound very mono toned... production is decent.. keep doing your thing.