memory lane ft. mofo
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4638439

i have the first verse and chorus. mofo is on the second verse. beat by da cypher.

links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106197
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106204

4 people already killed this beat on here:high:
hook is awful its off beat the echo or whatever is over done
you started on point then your flow got off a little bit lyrics were ok nothing special your emotion could be upped
this guy sounds kinda like past tense :huh: his verse was cool nothing really wowed me

^^sounding like me? WTF are you crazy

his voice is way to high

but anyways..you sound like cali...........and yeah...i'm not really feelin the flow.....lyrics are good you should try to take out some words and put in words with diff. syallables and it'll make it sound hot

yea, this beats ill

1st dude....quality is a bit iffy....writing good...kinda have the problem is have/had w pushing off flow for lyrics...gota get to a medium...left hook right thing, kinda played but used well....streem ocean line nice, i had one close to it...hooks not bad...2nd dudes nice..not as lyrical, but flows decent...went a totaly different direction then you..not a bad verse tho.....

thanks for all the honesty guys. up