new song "a million" please give feedback
 

can i get some feedback on this song....its calld "a million" im on the second verse and at the end
can u tell me who was the tightest lyrics /flow on this track me or the other cat (d-tox) and also wat do u think of the track as a whole

here is the link...http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4660703&q=hi


link works now! sorry


feedback i gave : http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106396
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106397

link dont work.....

sorry dudes the link works now http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4660703&q=hi

uhhhhhh no feedback?

you kinda remind me of a young un polished too short

um..i never really liked this beat but its iight!

i'm feeling the first dude's flow and rhyme scheme!


you got a better and comfortable presence/emotion on this..you got a steady flow..i'm liking it..ok this is some ok i get the concept!...idk whatelse to say..it was cool

lol @ list of girls and outro!

yeah thanks for the comments so far.....keep them cuming....thanks in advance

Playing...
got a mad old school feel to it.
Quality isnt too good bro.. flows on point though..lyrics arent good. very generic and simple ( personally I prefer tech rhymes)
Damn, cant beleive how oldschool this feels bro. lol.

Up your quality and this will be alot better.

Hook could do with more essence and energy. Second verse the same..

overal its ok.

yeah i kno bout da quality...im working from sum other dudes studio so i working on figuring out the best way to record down there and im seeing how were going ta acouticly treat da booth...thanks fo the advice....and the reason the rhymes r simple is cuz of the target on this one it was spose to be a song to get love from as much ppl as possible cuz its a "buzz generator" trust i got more suprises....rhymewise

keep the comments coming...bump

shit ain't bad. quality's not as bad as some may think, flow on point n lyrics simple. bla

Lmao @ the outro

thanks for all da comments so far keep them coming ( i love it wen ure thread gos bump bump bump)

bump..................................