RapVerse.com Community - my preseson battle vs red bull....detroyed him

yea i wanted to know what people thought, so im puttin it in here too

the track - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=626653

the lyrics (up until the free) -
hows this gon be a battle when i dont know this dude
you got how many posts and i aint noticed you
n for that to work your probally wack as hell
cuz you small time, like tiki babers acting skills

ill get you smacked for real, on the mic i kill
you sit and type lyrics....homie i write for real
what you write you feel, in your own sense
what i see is a no flow havin bitch, some nonsence

sribbled and thrown together somehow hopin
that you gon land a punch in times new roman..homie
show me you can actually spit fa shit
if not, its over, its done thats it....

cuz if you just doin text, no way your nicer
ill bomb on red bull like hes mixed with jegermister
jay is nicer then any wack ass text head
the fact is, ill backspace n leave your text dead

ill kill all like dead poets society
cuz you touchin me is like ebrics on sobriety
not gon happen never in a lifetime
the games changed you still usin lifelines

ill get you updated like virus protection
to prevent any viral infection
so you dont act up when you find your vagaina's infected
you act hard but cant buy an erection

throw and eye my direction thats it,
ill get you corrected like laser vision
shit im zoning off some umm rumm
im done.....

i aint gon battle no more, its not fair that i mangle this whore
he aint even got an ankle indoors..
let me explain that line incase it flew over this cump
you cant get your foot in the door of rap just doin text you punk

but beware that was a one time thing kid
tho most my shits prolly flyin over your think head
so we must be back in bmore like my god
again hosted by red bull im flyin my own flugtag

whos hot, whos not, who raps who writes
who can actually grasp the mic, who types....
there aint much else i got to say
cuz you aint said anything that i can play

you dont rap no you dont write lyrics
you just type things thinkin i might hear it
but hear it, you get go credit, no credibility
is sent your direction cuz you got no ability

so when your done typin shit
pick up the mic n ill battle bitch!
otherwise shut the fuck up
fore i fuck you up harder the cumfiesta
homie suck on a nut

the links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3107352
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065

yep now leave feed n ill return your favor