Prah'Ject & Implicit - "Every Breath"
 

Ayo this track is definitely HOT!!!


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intro - Implicit
verse 1 - Implicit
Hook - Prahject
verse 2 - Prahject

Ayo leave your links and we'll both drop some feed on it.



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236723

lol
you didnt drop the link to the song, man

damn i always do that. thanks man

no doubt. no feed? damn yo.

U christian...?

I hope you know Prah Ject is a pagan


neway

beat is coo

I like ur flow on the mic...and I thought u were white implicit

Ur rhyming needs to be upped...it's corny...and it makes ur lyrics lack intensity....

Prahject sounds like the whiney bitch he is...

This had a "real" track feel but Prah fucked it up with his fake ass thug style


I was expecting something uplifting...

this disappointed


Hate? Yea....I pretty much hated the direction of this track



1

Intro: pretty decent intro..... and this beat is really fitting for this beat....

Verse 1: i really like how u enter the track lyrically.... and the flow is pretty nice... sounds kinda like nas "one mic" at one point "all i needa are a couple snareS" .... words are ur weapon, played concept.... but u put a decent spin on it... kinda raw how u do a "my music is everythin" and u build all those metaphors/similes... nice

Hook: I like the hook, but why dont u repeat it in the first hook..... u really shoulda done it twice....

Verse 2: ur emotion is pretty nice on this.... half way through u have a tone shift that really makes the song.... "have to" "want to" loved the emotion on that... this track is pretty good, and u both sounded good on the beat... i think lyrically implicit took this, but u brought a better flow and presence.....

I like how u did the hook again.... thats wat i want throughout the song.... ohhh and i really hate the intro.... sayin "test me nigga, im gangsta" really shifts the whole song away from wat implicit was talkin about.... should prolly take it out...

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237260

^haha @ the outro...oh yeah its called the outro, not the intro.

but thanks for the feed. ima get at your track right now.

^^^ u liar... lmao, u left feed on like 8 OTHER tracks

^HEY!!! shh..its a secret..

but thats what RV needs. people to leave feed..actual feed.

not like this

"ayo son. dope track. you tight. leave feed on my song"

^^^ thats wacky

come on man. dont sleep on this one.

feedback por favor?

ight took me a while to get back to you sorry.....had shit to do, so starting off lets see how this goes.......

obvious you need some quality issues fixed...you have some pronunciation thigns that should be fixed....sounds like your reading or struggling to get it out....like getting it out is good enough, you should sound like its what your feeling and getting it out....your lyrics are really good, but prajects verse is better cuz how he said his you get it.....your verse could be like DAMN if you say shit right, you got lyrics down nice your flow is getting there
implicit you need some adlibs you have dubs but some adlibs in the back would help it out.....praject you need to calm down on your adlibs haha......hook is good.....praject your adlibs are starting to become fimilar from other songs.....and eating warm food in the suburbs is good so you know incase you dont.....im enjoying it haha......haha the woos at the end sounded like j summers hopped on the track almost exactly like his voice haha.....good shit production wise up the volume in your verse implicit, and get some new gear to clear up some muddy vocals.....or up the highs, but i dont know how much that would help.....

new gear? hahaha. i have better gear than probably 3/4 of the people on here. its not a matter of what equipement i use. its a matter of me learning how to edit the vocals.



so help? :help:

well what do you have and what do you do to your vocals

^^^ayo you got aim?