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DaTrusHurtz 11-19-06 08:17 PM

Group B: N. Tavarez (4-0) vs. Inhuman (0-0)
 
Its week 5 of this 7 week season. It's time to distance urself from the competition. There were some cool punches last week, but some of you still need to step it up! Drop nice or risk not making the playoffs.

Battler #1: N. Tavarez
Battler #2: Inhuman

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.

N.Tavarez 11-21-06 09:45 AM

in, soon to drop

N.Tavarez 11-21-06 09:49 AM

this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind

Inhuman 11-22-06 06:53 PM

lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave

N.Tavarez 11-24-06 10:29 AM

Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up

N.Tavarez 11-24-06 02:10 PM

oh and i dont want that faggot Serb voting on this.....i'll save you the hate vote bitch

Te Ora 11-24-06 04:12 PM

Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up
^ word. not bad

vs.

lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
^ nah
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave
^ lol ight flip. i don't see what businessman has to do with anything though. i woulda made it undertaker.

vs.

this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind
^ haha. cool.

v/ N.Taverez.

King Solo 11-24-06 06:17 PM

N.TAVAREZ
this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind
lol, this was a pretty clever nameplay.. it made me laugh although I still think that a bit better wording could've made it even better.

INHUMAN
lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave
the first bar was aight, nothing special. the second bar was decent.. the concept for the nameplay was fresh and all, but the wording was pretty weak and it comes across as too simplistic to have any real power.

N.TAVAREZ
Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up
Dope! This was a nice feed from his bar.. you turned the nameplay around dope and dropped the best bar of the battle.


Overall, this battle was pretty cool... the first three bars were all decent in their own rights, just some poor wording. The closing bar from Nelson was raw though and it killed both of Inhuman's bars. VOTE N.TAVAREZ

Diet Coke 11-24-06 10:59 PM

Tav
this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind
I laughed, not too bad..
Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up
Good feed, nice hit..

Inhuman
lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
Not bad, it was alright..
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave
It was okay, a little too easy though.

This was actually a pretty good battle.. but Tav edged it out..

Vote: N. Tavarez

Roger Glocks 11-25-06 08:45 AM

tavarez

this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind

^^decent...nice nameplay juss simple

lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it

^^aight that was cool
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave

^^err lil forced...good idea tho

tavarez

Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up

^^ya this was more fluid and doper

good battle...but the last punch took this

vote-N Tavarez

Spektikul 11-25-06 08:51 AM

N.TAVAREZ
this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind
LOL! Started this battle off hard as fuck, nice punch

INHUMAN
lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
There wasnt any real punch thrown at Tav here
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave
This was impressive, actual Tav nameplay thats not played, coulda been worded a bit better but ill give it to you

N.TAVAREZ
Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up
Not as hard as your first bar but it was good feeding off his and an alright way to end the battle.

Inhumans punches werent really all that great, neither was Tavs second bar in my opinion but his first one was killer. good job to both but the winners gunna have to be...

V/Tav.................

grams 11-25-06 11:29 PM

Forced wordplay, N concepts? I dont need to beat em YOU see he sucks
Cuz this Nturnal Clock you..... to let you know your time in this league is up
--aight but not great

vs.

lmfao @ that dude, ur through, you can't dodge my thunder hits
cuz ur life is on the line....that got a 'no' voted under it
--wasnt feeling at all
you have no chance bitch, i'll whip you like a slave
i ain't a businessman but i'll watch Nturn around in his grave
--not bad but could have been better

vs.

this veteran shine, Him and pussy ...they will never align
And even though his names Inhuman..he never fucked the feminine kind
--lol, nice punch and great wording

tav.........wins

N.Tavarez 11-26-06 12:51 PM

3 Votes, Owe You O0ne

DaTrusHurtz 11-27-06 09:06 AM

You do owe me one, but I trust that you'll do it, and I'd rather battles with fewer votes get votes instead of this.

N. Tavarez WINS 5-0
Inhuman LOSES 0-1


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