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Blay'all 11-21-06 03:28 AM

"Who I'm Is"... RV's HOTTEST OUT THE SOUTH!!!
 

Willa 11-21-06 02:30 PM

flow was straight fell off in some places
deff improvin

P To Tha R! 11-21-06 02:38 PM

Yeah we already know this beat is crack.....lookin fward to ya flow...I feel ya swag u got a nice swag....like ya hoook..but u go a lil high in there....maybe add more dubbs...vocals clear dope shit..flow is a lil off sometimes...but that's all good u got that south shit..delivery and swag is what u about...shuda mixed the hook diff and the 2nd hook seems its less dubbed then the actual verse jus a few lil things other than that id bump it..keep grillin

Blay'all 11-22-06 02:45 AM

preciate the feed yall... upppppppppppppppin

Kordozar 11-22-06 07:56 PM

Yo For Some Reason I Love This Beat...Ya Flow Was Kinda Off Point At Times Lyrics Ahh Stop Using Boy I Hate When People Do That But Overall Song Was Ok

TitoBronsky 11-22-06 08:37 PM

this is one of my favorite beats.............

hook is pretty well put together..... the verses... lacked a consistent flow.... fell off a few times... but... you put it down.... i see what P was sayin bout the swag... but...

King of the South???? i dont know bout all that there pimpin...

J. Luth 11-22-06 09:04 PM

yea, you def elevated. Shit was pretty coo. But lose the ego, when i peep that takes a lot away from it with your ego you got going. It'll only hurt you in the long run, can't help you. Good to have confidence, but yea.... coo shit tho. pc

Implicit 11-23-06 04:06 AM

alright aint heard you for a while. we need to get back on a track

hook - pretty cool like the energy. pretty clever

i like your energy on this first verse. flow is on point. dont really fall off anywhere. nothing that stood out lyrically. quality definitely got better

like this verse a lot better. cool flakin line. flow is a lil touchy in the middle of this verse though. you have gotten a lot better though


overall good job. jus fix that second verse in the middle. flow kinda falls off

iamthatdude87 11-23-06 12:36 PM

aight beat is coo delivery to me is ehh dubs need to be lowered n shit....a lil eq would make it sound nice....flow is cool off in sum spots......call you gaterade? ya flow is off n sum spots hookl sounds like your verse...........second verse sounds like the first verse overalll this wass aight needs some polishing it wuld be str8 rtf

Tha .Q 11-23-06 01:24 PM

like the beat...

swagger is fitting

lyrics left a lil to be desired


flow was good tho


pretty decent dawg




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Blackmage 11-24-06 02:36 AM

I had to do it because i seriously hate the south rap style...and i can't help notice that you've got who i'm is and who i be as 2 different songs lmao

Chorus is ok. I like your sway son...
33 what saaaaaayyyyy....
streets hungry time to say grace....lmao
You like the word boy alot huh......

whew second verse was kind of...ehhh

Overall song was ok. I like the beat alot. wish i had it i'd rip it to pieces with you....but i don't so eh. Vocals were alright nothing special, quality was good. Shit better than mine but who's isn't right?

8/10


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