Time For Change GOSPEL TRACK
 

whats up peeps
(im kind of wondering why you closed my last thread)

Time For Change gospel track

hook-untamed
verse 1- untamed
verse 2- me

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3846712
word up


check it out...i bump this on the regular

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btwww ure link dnt work fam hit me when it dooo so i can peep in the mean time can u peep my "FUCKIN WITH ME"

the link has been fixed

Wow....this is a pretty real track man. Is this some shit you had to get off your chest or just another track? First dude had some real ass lyrics. Yours were tight too PT. I'm feeling this track.....not your run of the mill gospel track. Needs a hook and a second verse that you two split again.....:thumbup:

for real we spit the hole beat though....but propz on that

just hit it up with a link if u want feed

ill get to it when i can

first dudes voice is pretty coo....

flow is kinda basic...seems like some westcoast flow shit though...not bad at all....delivery is pretty good.....everything seems straight.....lyrics arent mind blowing..but theyre ok...


i like it when u come in...i think u outshine this guy pretty well honestly....delivery is coo...when u say "thought he was a thug"..i like how u say that...

"riding on bikes" the dub was a lil off......overall this was some pretty dope shit though man.....i liked your verse better...but other dudes was coo....keep it up

thanks for all the feed i really appreciate it

uppin

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