Cot Dayum!!!!!!!
 

ha fuckin around been a while since i dropped something song features reflez or q or what not....he comes from a different angle but its mostly the same like hollering tryin to at someone who makes you got cot damn...!

COT DAMN = http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4736406



linksss - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237935
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237828

Aight....listening.


Beat sounds real familiar. Kinda like that one collab we did...lol.


Anyway....Flow's nice, nothing special, just some straight shooting. Hook sounds like it's got some real potential, but it's just kinda lack luster....like it's missing some umph.

Q, this is the first time I heard you back with the better quality. Man, I don't know what the hell happened to your delivery, but its gone man. You need to get that shit back. Flow was straight, but the monotone delivery really killed your verse for me man.

Back to Jay....pretty much the same as the first verse. good shit man.


Overall, this track had some real good potential, just needed some polishing up :thumbup:

hey good stuff man....i was feelin it from both of yall...one of the better shits ive heard from Q too...

i played this track a couple times.....which = rare for me to do on this site

word up thanks man....

preciate the feed











Good track Jay



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1st verse sounds like lupe fiasco. jay needs to get those dubs right on the 1st hook cuz they're noticably off which is killin the hook for me. i see Q finally got his quality back. well, i'll leave more feed later, g2g to class

thanks for the feed tony.....ill hit anyone back with some feed, dont be afraid to drop a link

aight...Jay first off...flows good nice and steady on the beat...which im feelin btw...lyrics are cool...fits in nicely...delivery is cool...

on the hook now...feelin the Cot Dayum but there's a slight mis timing on the dub to begin with...but its cool

Q up now...flows cool...rhyme scheme is good too...quality is much better than before...he changed mics?...but yeah steady verse there too...

overall cool track so far

Tito now?...na it's Jay!...man you sounded madly like Tito in 3rd verse lol...but ye cool again...

feelin this...i like the beat though where you fetch it from? it's on some Jay-Z type vibe

beat is from bad abbot.....check him out on soundclick hes from round where i live....yep

ahhh used the same sample as whats on young jeezy-go crazy for the beat haha...some good shit this though...mixin' and qualitys good...jays flows good, deliverys nice aswell, suits this beat....hooks effective although those dubs are slightly off i think....Q rips it aswell...got nice flow, nd emotions fine nd everythin'...yeerrrr decent track

^^Appreciate the feed people










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uppin lookin for some more feedback...

RTF on the track you jus jumped over - Crazy Lager

bitte schón :)

ha i got you......dont worry

eeeeeeeeer up








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