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KempoMRK 12-04-06 02:57 PM

30. GuM WoRk (0-0) vs 31. Player-X415 (0-0)
 


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GuM WoRk! 12-05-06 03:02 AM

Player fucking who!?

Player-X415 12-06-06 04:40 PM

Lyrical describes my technique
myrical my flow last week
if knowledge is what u seek
go fuck a college freak
inhale what i speak
exhale envy as im rolling in the cadillac
where i got your bitch to saddle that
italian stalion dick she came real quick
then i took a pic for porn addicts
now she's a slut star automatic
my vernacular's sparatic
I keep skeletons in my attic
fiilled to the brim your lights goin dim
like Apocalypse spread the word
no bitch ass mc's stoppin this
next time you see me
ill be on BET droppin hits
like Acid you acted to swiftly
now look what yo ass did.

GuM WoRk! 12-07-06 08:51 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Player-X415
no bitch ass mc's stoppin this
next time you see me
ill be on BET droppin hits


rofl.
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.
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Yea right, if anyone believes this guy please tell me
cause he needs to Re-Up his shit like the new Shady LP
I hope you never go audio, thats somethin I'd hate to see
then again I wish you would & sign the fuck out the league
With a name like that, Gums a thing you'd never smash
.. how the fuck you call yourself a player & never get ass
I could'a played off ur verse & talked bout how wack it was
but first Id have to understand, really how wack that shit was
Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches



bringin back the "KeyStyle" :thefinger

Native Pryde 12-07-06 09:45 PM

nothing.

vs.

I hope you never go audio, thats somethin I'd hate to see
then again I wish you would & sign the fuck out the league

wow, I really don't know what to say. It seems that player-x is brand new to battlin. I hope so n e ways. Gum's keystyle, who weak with no real punches, served its purpose & was enough to top players verse.

Vote- Gumwork

garbage

Sir Smash'Alot 12-07-06 10:15 PM

wow...

vs

I hope you never go audio, thats somethin I'd hate to see
then again I wish you would & sign the fuck out the league
Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches

V/ Gum Work easily..

Whatever

Stanza. 12-08-06 07:28 AM

LOL

vs

I hope you never go audio, thats somethin I'd hate to see
then again I wish you would & sign the fuck out the league
Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches

I cant believe I actually Read Players verse ....I should smakc myself ....Infact hol on *smack Myself* ///......man I would tell player x where he went wrong and how he could elevate but i dont have that much time man You need to switch your whole style all the way down to your name man

My v Gum

Luse Cannon 12-08-06 09:28 AM

Lyrical describes my technique
myrical my flow last week
Shitif knowledge is what u seek
go fuck a college freak
inhale what i speak
No shceme here at all
exhale envy as im rolling in the cadillac
where i got your bitch to saddle that
shit
italian stalion dick she came real quick
then i took a pic for porn addicts
now she's a slut star automatic
even worse than the first group
my vernacular's sparatic
I keep skeletons in my attic
could be an ok line if it was actually saying something
fiilled to the brim your lights goin dim
like Apocalypse spread the word
no bitch ass mc's stoppin this
next time you see me
ill be on BET droppin hits
like Acid you acted to swiftly
now look what yo ass did.
dont know what he was doin here but it was still shit


No hate towards you just hated your verse


Yea right, if anyone believes this guy please tell me
cause he needs to Re-Up his shit like the new Shady LP
an ok line but i see where u was goin with it

I hope you never go audio, thats somethin I'd hate to see
then again I wish you would & sign the fuck out the league
So True

With a name like that, Gums a thing you'd never smash
.. how the fuck you call yourself a player & never get ass
i hate lines like this but it got the job done

I could'a played off ur verse & talked bout how wack it was
but first Id have to understand, really how wack that shit was
your worse line of the battle but still better than all of his

Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches
Nice Closer. sealed the win easily right here

v/gum work

fuck yuu 12-08-06 01:12 PM

Nothing

vs

I hope you never go audio, thats somethin I'd hate to see
then again I wish you would & sign the fuck out the league
Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches


Obvouiously vote for Gum

Ace Heratoga 12-08-06 01:27 PM

lol Player...

Homie if you wanna battle in this leauge, I suggeset go lookin @ the archives of the champ and contender matches... cause it just seemed likeyou were cyphering really...

Gum... I understand you ain't have to drop much to win this... but if you plan on making a run... your gonna have to come much better than that...

Vote - Gum

TEF 12-08-06 04:44 PM

Nothing

VS

Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches
^AN OK SHOT AT BEST CAUSE ATLEAST IT’S NOT PLAYED

V/ Gumwork (Reluctantly)

I ain’t gont lie fellas, I aint like this battle at all!! Bost came pretty damn soft. Player, I Got lost tryna read yur shit and that’s what fucked it up for you. If your gonna use a Poetry structure (Which doesn’t really cut it in Text) You still need to put some creative stuff and hard hits in it. I have no Idea where you were goin with the BET thing or the stallon dick line, It just seem like one big jumbled up mess. Gum need some better punches if he’s gonna be anything in this league but atleast he had the Rocky thing

Erel Avent 12-08-06 06:55 PM

Aura that shit was ugly. What the fuck thats the worse verse I have EVER seen from you in your entire text career fuck boy. But you still won lol.

v: Gum

Te Ora 12-08-06 08:38 PM

nothing

vs.

Im the truth holmes, I'll eat you up & have ya on cruches
your like the new Rocky movie .. you only throwin old punches

^ i wouldn't be suprised if gum half assed after seeing what his opponent dropped. either way he was able to take this with a pretty weak verse.

v/ gum

KempoMRK 12-10-06 11:14 AM

Gum Work wins 9-0.

Gum Work wins (1-0)
Player-X415 loses (0-1)


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