My War Story.....deep ish...
 

ME and my friend on a bad mic...

Deep shit...


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hook flow is off beat
word fow is kindda off throuht out very choppy
lyrically not too bad
delivery is cool could be upped you need to learn how to mix
alright i dont wanna listen to the rest i got to 2 minutes

just make sure you flow on beat try and hit the snares which is the clapping like sounds

wack.........................