Fly Away.......this isnt rap....its art....
 

a real poetic approach to a beat i just love.....

produced by low file with goldspun on the hook......its a beat tito n tony n Q were on forever ago i just had to give it my own approach.....

Fly Away - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4744511


links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3121716

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238256

your voice reminds me of sombody cant recall .....beat is coo lyrics is coo flow is coo....hook is coo i like it.....second verse is coo as well but it sounds jus like the first verse tho i wish u switched the flow to keep it more interesting.....overall this song is coo i didnt really see any major things wrong wit it.....keep at it rtf my track is called Twisted

returning the favor dude....thanks for that nice feed on my track..i appreciate it a lot

liking the beat..your working it well too...i like how you pause before your last word of the lines.....nice...its diff than most of the flows you hear....which is good..

im liking the singing on the hook.....that on the original track or what?....good stuff though....

i like your voice as well...and your delivery mixed is illin....your probably the most underrated artist on this board..in all honesty....your one of the only cats that i can play a track more than once..........

you just got a diff style from most of the dudes...keep it up man

Yea...I remember this beat...

*wonders how I flowed to it*

Your flow is nice on it...

I like the delivery on the end rhyme, but the build up to them could have been more dramatic...

I like the message though.

Good track bro.

P.S. Good convo last night...Nothng wrong with a lil debate! ;)






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listening


the beat is smooth..its iight!

i'm liking your voice,your flow was quite cool and a lil melow

i like the hook..sounds cool as well

no complains on your mixing..delivery is decent and same 4 quality

Lyris are str8..reflective


i'd give your emotion a 6/7..


this hook is really cool..i like it alot!


hit my sig..thanx

The beat is alright, not anything I would fuck with. Your voice sounds like Eminem. I think when you end each line and you do that with the last word you should add a slight echo to it. It would've made it much better.
Im feeling the hook.
The 2nd verse so far is coo. Not really some shit I would listen to, but Im really feelin this damn hook though.
the 3rd verse is alright too. I like the hook more than anything in this song.
Overall the song in alright, its not really some shit I would prefer to listen to, but do what you do, ya dig?

i used this beat a LONNNNNGGGG time ago... back when i started off on a crappy webcam lmao... this beat is old.

now listenin, flow an delivery is on... i aint really feelin the lyrics on verse1 tho... especially at the end, ur rhyme scheme gets kindof annoying... verse2 is better. this verse is nice. u upped the lyrics here too. good shit.

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238373