Kung Lao vs Player-X415
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
You can use the verse you dropped before if you wish
No Biting

good luck fam

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 12-15-06 at 01:11 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Kung Lao has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-12-06 01:19 PM.

This asshole spits leavin niggas wipin off the doodoo specks
Ain't possessing skill if he hit Nas with a voodoo hex
I'll tenderise your rhymes...this nigga's brain hits dense
Askin 21 question's the only time he spit's sense (cent's)
I'll leave your flow fucked on video like Paris Hilton
Couldn't menace if the world was bald and called Wilson
P stinks with flow, i know from when i first saw you
Your name's played when there were 414 before you
Its elementary to see your rhyme schemes are pre-school
"It Only Hurts" when you're rockin records earned by Default...

don't understand a punch then PM me or don't vote

Player-X415 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-06 10:51 AM.

fuck this battle its time for war
u just a two bit whore on sluttin tour
I don't care if u know kung fu
u aint turnin no one into beef stew
keep dreaming while im haunting your nightmares like demons
from hell u reak of shit and everyone can tell
wit yo abosolete techniques old like Run DMC
watch out when u see this nigga from the sucka free
on a murderous mission layin lyrical incisions
u losing every battle so let me rattle yo brain
u fuckin rookie fuckin faggots to get a nookie
like a bitch ill snap ya jaw to the curb like a snitch
stop wit the retorical punches they giving me a headache
plus no competition u better start spittin more than repetition
just quit u lost yo lost your hip-hop vision

Voted For: Kung Lao

Player's verse was shit! Half of it didn't even rhyme. Kung Lao could of won this battle with his first bar alone.

V/ Darkmanner

uppin this shyte :)

up up n awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay :high:

Voted For: Kung Lao

fuck this battle its time for war
u just a two bit whore on sluttin tour
^Wak
I don't care if u know kung fu
u aint turnin no one into beef stew
^ Wak
keep dreaming while im haunting your nightmares like demons
from hell u reak of shit and everyone can tell
^ Wak n didn't rhyme
wit yo abosolete techniques old like Run DMC
watch out when u see this nigga from the sucka free
^This is just stupid...why the fuck do you even waist your time n mine?
on a murderous mission layin lyrical incisions
u losing every battle so let me rattle yo brain
^again..wak, didn't rhyme, and how the fuck do you lay lyrical incisions???does that even sound right to you? probably not...
u fuckin rookie fuckin faggots to get a nookie
like a bitch ill snap ya jaw to the curb like a snitch
^OMG
stop wit the retorical punches they giving me a headache
plus no competition u better start spittin more than repetition
Blah blah
just quit u lost yo lost your hip-hop vision
oh shit..theres an extra line??? Still wak

Your fucking garbage, thank god DTH booted you out the fucking league for this bull shit man. No punches, your verse wasn't even a verse because 80% of it didn't even rhyme at all either. What the fuck were you thinking when you jotted this piece of shit down?. Elevate....a lot...please...mu fuckas like you battling are killing the site these days. thank you

Punches...0/5
structure...0/5
metaphores..0/5
wordplay...0/5
overall verse...0/5

The lowest score Ive ever given..shaim on you

vs

This asshole spits leavin niggas wipin off the doodoo specks
Ain't possessing skill if he hit Nas with a voodoo hex
^meh punch...you worded it terribly and you focused more on the punch rather then dissing the person your battling
I'll tenderise your rhymes...this nigga's brain hits dense
Askin 21 question's the only time he spit's sense (cent's)
^no...this line was extremely wak to me...
I'll leave your flow fucked on video like Paris Hilton
Couldn't menace if the world was bald and called Wilson
^hated it
P stinks with flow, i know from when i first saw you
Your name's played when there were 414 before you
^poor wording
Its elementary to see your rhyme schemes are pre-school
"It Only Hurts" when you're rockin records earned by Default...
^nope..

well you have a better understanding of what battling is but...nothing from you stood out further then that first poorly written line. Your verse had one punch but it was more consistant then your oponents verse

Punches...1/5
metaphores...1/5 for attempting
structure....3/5
wordplay....0/5
overall verse...1/5

V/Kung Lao

This was feedback posted for Kung Lao
 

Polls............................................. .....

how the hell is Player-X415's record 2-0 in text??

Voted For: Kung Lao

umm.....u both didn't do great....but...

I'll leave your flow fucked on video like Paris Hilton
Couldn't menace if the world was bald and called Wilson

vs

nothing...

even tho DM's punch was played...better than ne thing Player laid down at all...

Voted For: Kung Lao

Alright

Punches - Darkmanner came more direct, Player-X415's were to basic.

Flow - Player-X415 had the better flow, Darkmanner didnt' rhyme on the last bar.

Multis - Not many to really speak of here so ill call it a tie.

Vocab - Player-X415 overal had the better vocab.

Personals - Darkmanner for having punches with a lil more depth than X415

Structure - Darkmanner definetly gets it here, Player-X415 had an inconsistant structure

Originality - Tie, both came with some played lines

Vote - Dark Manner