Speats-Thank You
 

Yup new track, my lyrics, my beat, my mixing woordd

www.myspace.com/speats

imma leave two links in a minute



http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3122910
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3122914

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this is different. nothin wrong with that tho. quality is nice. flows on for most part, deliverys ok.

beat - 6.5/10
chorus - 5/10
verse1 - 5/10
verse2 - 6/10

stay up.

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238373

do u have this on a soundclick?...

cos if i click on that myspace it'd freez my pc :(

not feelin the beat at all sounds like church music.......flow sounds a lil choppy but i think it culd be smoothed out....delivery is not there for me....oops i jus heard the flow slip....hook really sounds like church music........voice is ight....yeah i think u shoulda changed the flow on the second verse.....but yea overall i think this wulda sounded better on a diff. beat....stay up do you