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Ransum 12-13-06 02:08 PM

Gotta Keep Going.........
 
its been a min so im gonna brush the dirt off real quick and get back to my swager....

niggas keep hate'in you making me wanna spit more fucka's...

YO~!
I gotta keep going, keep focus, cuz niggas love to see you falling
But I keep the handle in control, so the NBA figuer they'll sue me.... Cuz they see the man BALLing
but i'll still snap ya wrist if u pick up the phone ,
guess you can call this the ghetto version of home alone
cuz after i slap ya face, i grip ya neck and start to strangle
and put 3 dots on ya forhead like a tri-angle
and fuck 8 balls i got cans of coke for ya man on the slops
who'll probley front, but end up butt naked like de'angalo
plus i got more fire arms to blow, u a young'in who probley lie to hes moms to go
to my show, give me credit tell he see hes girl on the floor
you better tell ya mans to bamano's , cuz when it comes to coke i'll look like the abominal
snow man, look you just dont know man,
you a bitch you NO-MAN, music off but ya girl'll look like she moving to slow-jams
so put ya hands up like u listening to jada-kiss
and dont try to make a diss, cuz ya girl rub'in my HEAD like she Made-a-Wish
YO....

BITCH NIGGAS its ransum on the mic
i dont need a hug bitch i just wanna fight
im bored on a misson tonight
that'll have the block looking like christman lights
you wanna diss me alright
cuz even if u was lefty all writing i'll be AL-RIGHT
YA HERD ME NIGGA...
YA BEST DISS IS AL-RIGHT....

lets get back at'em....

the whip outside, them crip's'll ryde the strip is live,
so lets see if ya byrd ass hoe can strip and fly
faggets nigga i told you ya far from better
ya niggas style need a patch up like rip sweaters
you just a hoopie that's sounding all loud like crack headers
the pistol with the black leather i'll have u folding like long letters
it'll just take 1 word an i'll get ya hoe all wet up,
talking shit? SHUT UP, im better off waiting for a criple to get up...

thats it for now........

i'll be back with more fire.....

P.M. me two links and I will reopen your thread. Links cannot be over 10 days old.

Ransum 12-13-06 09:55 PM

upp'in this joint....

scanz 12-14-06 01:38 AM

not really good... u need to work on ur structure and flow more... lotta stuff there is basic...only real line i liked was but i'll still snap ya wrist if u pick up the phone ,
guess you can call this the ghetto version of home alone. but besides that its kinda lame..... not many peeps would get the line being that homealone is an old movie and it was also crappy......

Ransum 01-03-07 02:55 PM

thanks for the comment......................


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