1st poem
 

to the blind eye i am feared by none

in reality i am feared by all

to most i am evaded

to some i am embraced

the educated have ways of chasing me away

however i am always lingering

and i will find you....

Interesting whats this about?

death .

i can dig it not bad at all

good shit man...sounds like you like the dark shit....the only real peice of advice i have for you is that you dont have to double space to make it look bigger....try on the other hand to make it longer lol you kinda left the reader hanging....

this was a nice feel in it with your emo dark as wanting and liking shit liek that lmfao.. but yea man you had some nice wording aswell but a hint with lyrical is that your double space shit is irritating man....make it though a bit longer aswell unless your got a very deep and nice wording that you can suma whole story with a nice wording and grammar stature in a few lines then by all means do it!...but yea nice dorp man!.