2nd track off the new mixtape: "Learn ya ABCs"...check me out
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

^Click on "Learn your ABCs"

Beat: Spontane
Hook: Tha Q
Verses 1 & 2: Q

Note: I used a line from Biggie's "Kick in the door"

RESPECT

Concept: teaching fools why not to cross me...ABC style


Holla


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Nice song Q. I ike the lyrics and the flow. Of course I like the beat but I wish the song was faster. I like the chorus too, and I assume that's why this is called learn your ABC's. You had two quick quotables early which kept me listening.

"MY flow spic and span-ish like I'm Mexican"
"With all your ghostwriters, your flow's just ghoulish"

Tough stuff.....

Word.....dude, you would really benefit from some shit talking or something in the beginning of the track. I don't think that this slow flow suits your delivery well. Lyrics were nice. Hook was pretty tight. Second verse's delivery seemed a little better than the first until about halfway through the verse, then you picked it up a little at the end. Hook is crack though man.......wtf? Why the hell do you always do the 2 verse song? Finish the shit off man.....lol.

^^word...I was in a dilemma about what to do at the beginning of the track...I'll add some later


And, 2 verse tracks are my steez man...I like em short n sweet


But...I wud do 3-4 verses on a deep song




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yea, them lines is ill here, lol @ pra line....u know im not riggin the beat....but i ride it well, flows on n shit.....hook worked well....shits ill ...pound cake line was ehh...productions good....delevery is rite on...real professional sounding...good stuff

yeah spicca, i gotchu

lmao @ spic and span-ish line. awww, u were thinkin bout me werent u? -_-

flow good wif this beat, beats pritty koo. ur good at makin hooks fasho, always got sum catchy shit.

dope shit az usual mayn. lyrics n all that.

*flash of smoke*

*disapears*

:cool: werd

For starters I'd like to say..I had that idea..Make way...

beat:the beat is real gritty.sorta not my thing or style i like,but the way u..
Flow:..flow'd on it was nice,ur voice is rugged street feel,man if u could exercise ur vocals an adjust them to match the energy like a instrument..u'd be killin the beat.
Lyrics:(took a 2nd listen)yea the spic n span line was pretty funny(im puerto rican foo)but im not hatin on u(thas my black half talkin)Im feelin ur lyrics..I can see u doin sumthan,u got lyrics,but not really over the top,juss enough for the dumb'd down syndrome cats can feel..then right amount for lyricist to want more.

Overall/-8.5/10

y=Cuz the beat just isnt amp'd enough for that hook..Now for an underground junt,id mos def rock it on my mix cd..so no hate,but not the greatest tho'...u mos def did ur thing on it tho'..i'd give a 9/10 but the hook couldve used a lil more energy in it..juss the emotion of it..Now me,i cant critique my songs,so i know it might sound odd comin from sum1 that u might not even consider nice,dope,ill nor sick..but im givin u my view from a listeners point..only reason i left this much thus far is cuz ur talent'd..an i can see u actually havn a shot..cuz id bump ur shit,if u'd pick up on the bang in the drums a bit..that my only prob,bob.

props to u.

^^Appreciate the extensive feed









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this shit was hott tell u tha truth i wasnt even gon bother but im glad i clicked ya link real nice track here i actualy liked this flow on you it was just werkin errywhere....
ya delevery was much difrent and fit dope here lol......beat was hott to me i was feeling that shit....hook was fucking sick man no shit talkin involved.....str8 up nice shit here....

i gave it a second bump before downloading:thumbup:
good shit
wunn

^^Preciate da feed


PS...wasn't aware that u even peeped my stuff Troublesome





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naw i used to be feeling ya old shit......smoke to this remix was my favorite shit from you it was hott this track out done it by far.....good shit man........im liking this flow and swag alot more

the beat is tight mos def i like the sound of this jammy jam but i gotta say when i heard the beat i was anticipationg that slow to fast flow and shit but this shit is doin it the beat is hella slick the hook is hella catchy woulda like an echo on the a b c a lil more than just libbed or maybe even added some that like voicemail shit talk at the end no doubt a def banger

word you know ima need to get on ya mixtape....haha you said goulish weird....good thing you didnt do this concept how i was going to.....but in feed, throw some echo or something in a dub on the abc parts....so it resenates.....make it sound more professional......back to tha Q which is ill, cuz that name is better....nice hook....nice song....get me on a track near the end of the mixtape word...hahah stay up

^^No doubt man...

Spots on this mixtape will be exclusive...Not saying I'm all that and a bag of chips...But, I only wanted to have 1-2 collabs on it anyway...3 at the absolute most...




Preciate the feed too

haaa




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Nice track Q...the beat is tight and hype so it makes it a good song to listen too more then ones. your vocals are a bit too high I think on the first verse and it was ok, Hook was nice and a bit catchy to me. it was hype so it gets points for that. 2nd verse lyrics was way better then the first. The Quality was better on it as well. all in all this was a tight song with good elements that would make you want to listen to it a few more times but you'd expect the next track on the mixtape to be better. 6.5/10