time to Vent a little steam....
 

bitch ass fagets wanna get drastic?
ok let him have it, with suran wrap holding hes face after i smashed it
begin the bash'in old fashion with brass knuckles till hes noise mashed in
left him with hes frame crashed bent then reframe from repeatin laugh'in
got'em chain'ed.. pulling till i strain... while im block'ing all the screams
and keep pulling till i see hes bones like x-rays or till he leaks out hes brains
big pimp'in? more like quick lift'in of the 4 5th'in
and squeez till i see hes cheast flip'in and body twiching
grab the phone while i pistol whip hes ass with the chrome
and start chocking him till he phomes or hes peeps come home
brake 3 of hes fingers so he'll always have peace in mind
reless in time if i get locked but thats after ferenzic re-peace the crime
im a beast with rhymes, addicted to O.Ding with lines
even got the crack head's ready to buy my cd since my cover off of one of my "high time"

mother fuckers always wanna test the kid ransum
acting like i owe'em a favor or like im a babysitter for grandson
im after the stack's like a "grand" son so dont forget this
you just after the plaque like future dentis


to be continued


P.M. me two links and I will reopen your thread. Links cannot be over 10 days old.

upp'in for comments????

yo wussup!

"bitch ass fagets wanna get drastic?
ok let him have it, with suran wrap holding hes face after i smashed it
begin the bash'in old fashion with brass knuckles till hes noise mashed in"

this rhymestyle reminds me of a grimey gohstface killah! just how you approach ya rhyme'n

on this bar vvvvvv
"mother fuckers always wanna test the kid ransum
acting like i owe'em a favor or like im a babysitter for grandson"

you might wanna work on not crammin or addin to many words between rhymes
later

who are some of your favorite rappers?

i like alo of rappers like the whole D-BLOCK * favorit group* fabolous, ghostface, ransome *thats why i name my self after him lol* jay-z, nas, eminem, lloyd banks, papouse, busta rhymes, ludachris, lil wyne, J.R WRITER *the writers of writers* cam'ron, and a few dvd smack kids that are preety hot like murdah mook, wrecks, party arty, i like alot of dudes but some i feel more then others even thou those few others might be tossing a bounch of punchlines sometimes it aint always about punchlines its "REAL TALK" I FEEL THE MOST THATS WHY STYLE P IS IN MY TOP 5.....

thanks for the comment kid