RaI$Ed vs Ransum
 

Battle Rules:

5 bars = 10 lines Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-04-07 at 06:37 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-07 12:37 PM.

aight kid good luck.


beef?
thats cool cuz i got mines the cocked nine,
stay on the corner like stop signs giveing out work so fumbling a pack only way i drop dimes / 1
why u trying to out-mines?, i'll leave u outlined
and if u husstling that YA~! u'll end up like a blank sheet of paper without-lines/ 2
i spit hot flames dont get caught in the blaze,
ya pap's must be a prist cuz u knew u'll get taken advantage of... guess thats how you was RaI$Ed/ 3
ya days up like calender on the ceiling, pull ya skin back so u could look Apealing, guess im like a crack-head cuz stab'ing you give me that satifiying feeling/ 4
i hate being the bully but you like benzino but its glad to see, that your blood is the flavor to this source magazin/5

RaI$Ed has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-07 12:58 PM.

yo...quick key...this shits weak but wait for lbl

im suprised you showed usually you quick to run
dont need a pissed off child to see the bitching son...[bitch in sum]
you re lines are horrible, they are past just weak
ran is defining illness, getting the dictionary as we speak...
ran- sum thing ill out of your mouth just cant be said
ill show youre the pussy on this site like an eye candy thread..
no artist wants you on their feature like a pimpl on top of their face
the last time you posted sumthing ill is when you copied and past...
blah blah blah
ha ha ha...

hey we both drop preety weak,
maybe next time we'll try to actully spit some heat insted of this weak shit...

agreed...i was busy so i just typed shit...lol....

Voted For: RaI$Ed

Raised = Better structure and flow...Crappy battle none the less nothing stuck out

Voted For: RaI$Ed

Rai$ed

im suprised you showed usually you quick to run
dont need a pissed off child to see the bitching son
-Nothing to special, basic 2/5
you re lines are horrible, they are past just weak
ran is defining illness, getting the dictionary as we speak.
-ha, thought that was pretty funny, nice 4/5
ran- sum thing ill out of your mouth just cant be said
ill show youre the pussy on this site like an eye candy thread..
-A little bland, no punch or personal, like filler 2/5
no artist wants you on their feature like a pimpl on top of their face
the last time you posted sumthing ill is when you copied and past
-Good closer, ended with a personal/punch combo 4/5

Total:12/20

Ransum

beef?
thats cool cuz i got mines the cocked nine,
stay on the corner like stop signs giveing out work so fumbling a pack only way i drop dimes
-Multi's were kinda forced, weak opener 2/5
why u trying to out-mines?, i'll leave u outlined
and if u husstling that YA~! u'll end up like a blank sheet of paper without-lines
-end up like a blank sheet of paper without-lines<--Best line 3/5
i spit hot flames dont get caught in the blaze,
ya pap's must be a prist cuz u knew u'll get taken advantage of... guess thats how you was RaI$Ed
-Weak stretched line 1/5
ya days up like calender on the ceiling, pull ya skin back so u could look Apealing, guess im like a crack-head cuz stab'ing you give me that satifiying feeling
-Ya days up like calender on the ceiling Didnt understand that no punch or personal 1/5
i hate being the bully but you like benzino but its glad to see, that your blood is the flavor to this source magazin
-Again no punch personal or anything pertaining to him except for hes like benzino 2/5

Total:didnt bother

Vote:Rai$ed

Rai$ed had better punches and came more consistent most of Ransum's lines were filler no real punches or personal, one attempted personal by Ransum but it didnt hit...lines were stretched and hard to read

Voted For: Ransum

yeah that shit rocks
u killed him wit 3 lines

the whole thing was gd.. ransum
name punch its funny, but fair competition

"ya pap's must be a prist cuz u knew u'll get taken advantage of... guess thats how you was RaI$Ed/ 3
ya days up like calender on the ceiling, pull ya skin back so u could look Apealing, guess im like a crack-head cuz stab'ing you give me that satifiying feeling/ 4
i hate being the bully but you like benzino but its glad to see, that your blood is the flavor to this source magazin/5"

raised great stuff
u lost me with the pimple line u could of won
tight battle

upp'in this battle......................................

can i get some votes?????????
ANY VOTES??????
SOMEONE?????
PLEZ VOTE???

can i get some votes?????????
ANY VOTES??????
SOMEONE?????
PLEZ VOTE???

This was feedback posted for RaI$Ed
 

RaI$Ed
"you re lines are horrible, they are past just weak
ran is defining illness, getting the dictionary as we speak..."
didn't really coem to strong..butt didn't really need it

Ransum
You didn't realy have anything.. everythig was to longgg and played outt.. ya need to be short and to the point to make your punche shit.. and get personal..try to insult.. not talk about killin him with guns.. lame shit

Voted For: Ransum

man ransom u got it again. sorry it aint ur fault but u gotta battle someone who knows that there are words that exist that contain more than 4-5 letters. i mean people can talk shit, and even if u do have a dictionary, obviously them fucks need to sell some of there EBT or save there minimum wage for a couple weeks n buy one, ignorant fucks