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DaTrusHurtz 01-07-07 02:09 AM

11. Wireless (2-0) vs. 12. Vitticus (2-0)
 


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Heychoo 01-07-07 01:07 PM

sup. like 10...

Multi 01-07-07 06:01 PM

Word 10 is cool....

Heychoo 01-11-07 09:38 PM

figured i'd key something, doesnt look like you'll show anyway...

axeshun, action, vitts, all that bullshit to me is the same
we'll worry about getting your punches, u worry about getting your name
ur not a rapper, ill strike quickly, leave this singer shaking
cuz the art of war for you has moreso just turned into fingerpainting
i might as well say you're gay and i'll spin your ass around like a globe
a girl asked u wut ur sex drive is and u said down the yellow brick road
dude ur wordplay sucks, kill that shit off and dont even look at the hearse
shit, you know its bad when somebody's corniest shit isnt even in their verse
nothing you say matters, and everybody knows im fucking right
i'll just drop axe and leave the shun to fit his status on this site

Multi 01-12-07 03:09 AM

You know what ta gettin shutr out, you're pitiful wtf do you even do here, b?
Wire was down for the count while we did the count down to new years eve
I open my circle to you, a sqaure that doesnt know what to use against me
Wipe my ass wit ya verse & wipe the grin off ya face, ya sense of humor? empty!
See we'd love to tell ya Knight but this is chess and here...your a rook fuck
Now look @ your gaye ass name that further shows us you aint got the hook up
Kuala kick this prick and slap em' with my boot see, he has no chance of winning
So we should refer to baseball cuz your verse really needs a better inning
Keeps your hopes up and your head high, though your chance is frail & slim
Who the fuck would bite him?
When the damn prime objective of biting a verse is one that'll help you WIN!


...10.

Pro. 01-12-07 08:30 AM

Kuala kick this prick and slap em' with my boot see, he has no chance of winning
So we should refer to baseball cuz your verse really needs a better inning
^aiight,pretty coo.



vs..



ur not a rapper, ill strike quickly, leave this singer shaking
cuz the art of war for you has moreso just turned into fingerpainting
^pretty coo..Ive seen art of war concepts..I used it onse too,but nice flip.
nothing you say matters, and everybody knows im fucking right
i'll just drop axe and leave the shun to fit his status on this site
^decent

Overall/-I think wireless just edged it out here a lil...IMO...Vitts wording was a bit strange to catch at times..an threw off the punch..so only one quote stood out to me..but u had potential concepts but didnt execute'em right.While as wieless had sum played punches..an his opener was worded off,but good lil idea..I juss wireless had a the art of war line which im pretty sure its rather plaayy'd..but i havent sen it done like he did it..so I gave him a benefit of doubt..an the shun line was pretty decent..while as I felt the inning line from Vitts...no hate just my opinion.

V/-wireless.

Binary I 01-12-07 10:50 AM

uhh

you guys have horribly stretched lines but for the sake of flow at least vitticus had it down

axeshun, it took me like 5 minutes of lookin over your verse to make any sense of the extremely stretched lines.

i liked vitticus better, wireless had some okay lines but vitticus came damn hard this round

v-vitticus

TonyTone 01-12-07 01:34 PM

all i was really feelin from wireless was the closer and even that concept is a bit played on em. the rest seemed filler-ish to me, perhaps simply because he keyed his verse. all i know is the last i've seen from wire was much better than this. axe had the hook up line, inning punch was sorta bland....decent attempt tho. another attempt with the closer but the punch itself was simply not very creative. like binary just said, both of you have very stretched lines. ummm......

v/ vitticus, just came wittier to me

Heychoo 01-12-07 04:51 PM

yo he dropped late holla ill take the win goodbye ASHALALALA DERKA DERKA

TEF 01-12-07 07:37 PM

Nothing

VS

Keeps your hopes up and your head high, though your chance is frail & slim
Who the fuck would bite him?
When the damn prime objective of biting a verse is one that'll help you WIN!
OK I GUESS

v/ VITTICUS

For thte only line in the whole battle that was somewhat ok, the rest of both verses put me to sleep

Wordz AhGod 01-12-07 09:18 PM

i might as well say you're gay and i'll spin your ass around like a globe
a girl asked u wut ur sex drive is and u said down the yellow brick road

vs

nothing

Wireless came weaker then usual so I could tell he just didn't care...but Vit came out with stretched lines and bad punches...not a usual for him really. I wasn't feeling any of his lines enough to quote em'. So Im going with Wireless on this one

V/Wireless

Multi 01-12-07 10:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wireless
yo he dropped late holla ill take the win goodbye ASHALALALA DERKA DERKA

Today is friday i says I dropped yesterday so...I'm not late.

Heychoo 01-12-07 11:20 PM

check the time homebitch i got dat shit on lock i know what its like

Multi 01-13-07 12:36 AM

w/e fag, you suck ass.

DaTrusHurtz 01-14-07 11:44 AM

Vitticus posted 9 minutes late. That's one hell of a bitch move by Wireless, but sorry Vitticus, if he wants the DQ win I'm forced to give it to him.

Wireless WINS 3-0
Vitticus LOSES 2-1


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