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I Try....deeper kinda track
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3134058
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=239064&page=2 there u go sorry i did it the bum way this time but yea tell me what yall think |
you sound nasally like your sick
lyrically its cool uhm wtf jsut happened it got to the hunger is comin and shut off lol what i heard was cool though |
Listenin'..
word at this beat, shit is real hot...sample gives you a feeling..you're on... soundin like a second Tito...flow seems to me off in some places, emotion is on the dot..that's good..delivery is decent..flow is way off 1/2 the time..lyrics is real talk... this is cool, Ive heard better..I mean emotion is right..but flow to me is off half the time, lyrics is good, n delivery is str8..so wrk on that flow there..holla back..-1-.. |
Beat Is Kinda Cool, ... Lyrics Are Nice, ... Haha Dope Sample, .... Like The Dude Above Said The Flow Fell Off At Points, ... But Other Then That This Was A Coo Track, Keep It Up Fam ,... `1
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uppin for more opinions and suggestions
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I like the beat...nice
ur rhyming was slick and everything sounded pretty good keep it up 1 |
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