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Trouble

check this one called Trouble. Hit me back up for what yall think.




http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3134790

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239235

beat kinda reminds me of money in the bank
delivery is pretty monotone flow is on but it could be smoother
rhyme scheme is really basic
adlibs dont stnad out
put a delat on the hook or somethin

aint my type of beat. but its koo.. yea flow is a lil basic, get some emotion mannn lol put some umff in ya voice.. sounds like u readin..

hey man, yeerr basically what those other two've said..sounds like ya holdin back abit from the mic or somethin, nd does get abit monotonous after a while..try putting more energy into it..having said that the flow was good, and the beat wasnt all that bad...keep elevatin man