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Btizzle 01-13-07 04:24 AM

Twisted Visions vs Gay Bear
 
Battle Rules

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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System 01-13-07 04:25 AM

Gay Bear has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-07 04:25 AM.

System 01-13-07 04:58 AM

Twisted Visions has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-07 04:58 AM.

Twisted Visions 01-14-07 12:52 AM

It's another homicide, so let my shit play
I chop your head off like my name was OJ
i'll slap your ass around like your name was Kim
and yes this gay bear takes more dick than Feminem
Another day, another busta wanna battle me
Another momma cryin now her baby is a casualty
and yea dude, gay sex is a good way to get STDs
Hepatis B, and ya i agree, you a wack ass Femcee
Openly admittin u gay, you dont spit fiya you spit jizz
Should be called Hersheys bitch.......
................cuz you know you love a chocolate kiss

Twisted Visions 01-15-07 01:20 PM

Yo you droppin or what homie......................

Btizzle 01-15-07 09:06 PM

Look here, I got the skills to damage and break amateur fag
But on the keys you're Crazy...no wonder you're Mad that you're bad
See the fact that you suck isn't fake...I punch and rip out your spine and
You will never get a good punch....since you are last one in the line man
Dude listen, you got it wrong,I don't think I am smarter than the rest
But honestly everybody can C < that you're just average at best
I am going 10...I hope you know it's all I need to handle Twisted y'all
Because this will never be 20-20....< you've got bad Vision after all
So with that said...20-20...will be 0-5...not in a way that you'll like
Cause it's apparent < that you're the reason that they both died

Twisted Visions 01-15-07 10:24 PM

Nice drop bro, Let's get some votes flowin like mother natures period

Twisted Visions 01-18-07 02:43 AM

Fuck all you dumb mother fuckers that dont move Suuuuck Myyyy Diiiiiiick

Btizzle 01-21-07 06:16 PM

WOW please somebody vote

GKillaz05 01-21-07 07:12 PM

Voted For: Gay Bear

Btizzle:
Look here, I got the skills to damage and break amateur fag
But on the keys you're Crazy...no wonder you're Mad that you're bad
2 - weak opener.
See the fact that you suck isn't fake...I punch and rip out your spine and
You will never get a good punch....since you are last one in the line man
3/10 - meh.
Dude listen, you got it wrong,I don't think I am smarter than the rest
But honestly everybody can C < that you're just average at best
3/10 - meh.
I am going 10...I hope you know it's all I need to handle Twisted y'all
Because this will never be 20-20....< you've got bad Vision after all
4/10 - ok.
So with that said...20-20...will be 0-5...not in a way that you'll like
Cause it's apparent < that you're the reason that they both died
2/10 - nah.
14





Twisted Visions:
It's another homicide, so let my shit play
I chop your head off like my name was OJ
2/10 - weak opener.
i'll slap your ass around like your name was Kim
and yes this gay bear takes more dick than Feminem
2/10 - lame.
Another day, another busta wanna battle me
Another momma cryin now her baby is a casualty
3/10 - meh.
and yea dude, gay sex is a good way to get STDs
, and ya i agree, you a wack ass Femcee
0/10 - "Hepatis B" lmao, oh my go to skool foo'
Openly admittin u gay, you dont spit fiya you spit jizz
Should be called Hersheys bitch.......
................cuz you know you love a chocolate kiss
5/10 - niice closer.
12/50

Cola 01-22-07 03:15 PM

Voted For: Gay Bear

jesus...this was a horrible baddly...no punches...just bad wording .....

but....

Btizzle took it for attemptin to form a semi good punch in my eyes....but B you really gotta work on your structure.....that shit is mad whack...

Ramcees 01-27-07 08:25 AM

Voted For: Gay Bear

better then twisted but weak, i read both 5 times and this was hard decision i hope dat wasnt ur best
both of u
btizzle

chip 01-30-07 11:06 PM

Voted For: Gay Bear

Btizzle... wow, don't know who u are, but hot verse... nice job explaining your punches, but not neccesary for anyone really paying attention...

TV... gay femcee? i expected better, more creative punches from u... analogies were terrible, rhyme scheme was mediocre...

vote: Btizzle


Vote switched

Brandon Cee 01-31-07 12:32 AM

This was feedback posted for Gay Bear
 
checkin the polls...good luck guys


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