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DaTrusHurtz 01-21-07 11:41 AM

27. §howcase (0-0) vs. 28. Marksmen (0-0)
 


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§howcase 01-21-07 02:13 PM

Eh. Just match me son. I should be dropping before tuesday.

§howcase 01-21-07 04:48 PM

I got exams this week so I'm not even gonna try.

Quick Key...


Doper than the best son, my history you better check it,
Or I’ll leave you with so many lumps, my tea will feel neglected.
I plan to run you over and those cheap shots I’ll take a few,
So just be wary where you tread-mark…or I’ll leave them all over you.
We know you're a knight, but seriously you fell dude,
With such a checkered past…that shows why you keep making L moves.
Thinking you look good? Hell no, your youth diminished,
I mean just check your body, bag…right after I leave you in it.
All your taunting and bitching is wasted, don’t make this violent,
Only thing your trash talk does is cause garbage men to take a vow of silence.
I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.

Marksmen. 01-22-07 06:21 PM

guess i'll drop too.

You said you was murderin' me? You're right I'm handled, fuck it
you are killin' me with ya raps...
cuz it's takin' a lifetime to understand ya punches
You ain't a player, people visit you but they never be hoes.
chicks going to watch a movie's the only way they comin' to see Show
Nah, I can't say he's not a player, in fact, he's a pimp kinda
Showcase is the head of the players... fan club for dickriders
You don't measure up to satisfaction, I know that troubles you B
only time you heard you was Big, Show... you was watchin' WWE
Respect this kid's spit or I'll send death when fist hit
I'll give ya face so many hooks, there'll be none left to fish with
Stretch ya ribs quick, I'll stretch you til it hurts, brother
that way your whole anatomy can match your verse structure

Area51 01-22-07 09:19 PM

showcase:
We know you're a knight, but seriously you fell dude,
With such a checkered past…that shows why you keep making L moves.
I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.

marksmen:
You said you was murderin' me? You're right I'm handled, fuck it
you are killin' me with ya raps...
cuz it's takin' a lifetime to understand ya punches
You don't measure up to satisfaction, I know that troubles you B
only time you heard you was Big, Show... you was watchin' WWE

close battle.. both each had decent verses, I like Showcases closer.. and I felt his verse was a little more consistant

vote-showcase

Marksmen. 01-22-07 09:43 PM

check in, btw lol..
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3137578
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3138999
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3139003
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3139005

King Solo 01-23-07 12:02 PM

I plan to run you over and those cheap shots I’ll take a few,
So just be wary where you tread-mark…or I’ll leave them all over you.
I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.


VS.


You said you was murderin' me? You're right I'm handled, fuck it
you are killin' me with ya raps...
cuz it's takin' a lifetime to understand ya punches
You don't measure up to satisfaction, I know that troubles you B
only time you heard you was Big, Show... you was watchin' WWE


This wasn't the best battle. I was expecting something decent because both heads are good. In all honesty I can see clearly that show didn't try because he had like two bars that were ok and the rest I just wasn't feeling. Marksmen only had a couple of bars to, but I felt that his bars were a little bit better than show. The tread-mark line was dope from show, but the on your level punch was ok enough to quote but could've been better. Likewise, Mark had the WWE line which I found amusing, but his opener should've been worded better.

V/ - Marksmen

13th Apostle 01-24-07 12:14 PM

We know you're a knight, but seriously you fell dude,
With such a checkered past…that shows why you keep making L moves.
I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.

vs.

You don't measure up to satisfaction, I know that troubles you B
only time you heard you was Big, Show... you was watchin' WWE
Respect this kid's spit or I'll send death when fist hit
I'll give ya face so many hooks, there'll be none left to fish with
Stretch ya ribs quick, I'll stretch you til it hurts, brother
that way your whole anatomy can match your verse structure

Marksmen just came more consistent in this battle

V/Marksmen

TEF 01-24-07 04:39 PM

I plan to run you over and those cheap shots I’ll take a few,
So just be wary where you tread-mark…or I’ll leave them all over you
GOOD
I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.
^ ^NICE SHIT

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You said you was murderin' me? You're right I'm handled, fuck it
you are killin' me with ya raps...
cuz it's takin' a lifetime to understand ya punches
BOARDERLINE FEEDING BECAUSE OF THE OTHER GUY'S CLOSER BUT I LIKED IT
Respect this kid's spit or I'll send death when fist hit
I'll give ya face so many hooks, there'll be none left to fish with
WHOOOAH GOOD PUNCH
Stretch ya ribs quick, I'll stretch you til it hurts, brother
that way your whole anatomy can match your verse structure
DECENT SHOT

Vote :Marksmen

Both you guys did your thing but I think Marks was a lil more consistant. Good battle tho, way better than I thought it would be.

N.Tavarez 01-26-07 10:30 AM

I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.
I plan to run you over and those cheap shots I’ll take a few,
So just be wary where you tread-mark…or I’ll leave them all over you.
We know you're a knight, but seriously you fell dude,
With such a checkered past…that shows why you keep making L moves.


vs

You don't measure up to satisfaction, I know that troubles you B
only time you heard you was Big, Show... you was watchin' WWE
Respect this kid's spit or I'll send death when fist hit
I'll give ya face so many hooks, there'll be none left to fish with
Stretch ya ribs quick, I'll stretch you til it hurts, brother
that way your whole anatomy can match your verse structure

WHOA close battle, i read shows shit earlier this week and was digging it, but then mark posted just as good so props for that
this could go either way but in the end it'll be decided by what style the particular voter likes
in this case i was feeling markmen style of texting more
v/ mark

Wordz AhGod 01-26-07 06:49 PM

I’m not on your level? Please! You’re making me nauseous,
Guess I’ll have to get on your level…and fall to my death in the process.

vs.

You ain't a player, people visit you but they never be hoes.
chicks going to watch a movie's the only way they comin' to see Show
Respect this kid's spit or I'll send death when fist hit
I'll give ya face so many hooks, there'll be none left to fish with
Stretch ya ribs quick, I'll stretch you til it hurts, brother
that way your whole anatomy can match your verse structure

Almost an evenly matched battle but Marks edged it out a bit. Not the best battle this week but decent read though.

V/Marksmen.

§howcase 01-26-07 09:46 PM

Hmmmm. Okay. I won't be a bitch and say anything. Good shit Marks. I'm about to do some voting.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239505
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239497
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239499
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239502

DaTrusHurtz 01-27-07 03:53 PM

Uppin for more votes

Mets 01-27-07 11:56 PM

Show

I plan to run you over and those cheap shots I’ll take a few,
So just be wary where you tread-mark…or I’ll leave them all over you.


Marks

You don't measure up to satisfaction, I know that troubles you B
only time you heard you was Big, Show... you was watchin' WWE


not that great of a battle. both had some played hsit. like that hooks line from marks ..i cant believe that is gettin props. its in ancient line. and shows garbage man line isnt quite as old but its up there. but word, not that great of a battle ..i;m givin it to marksman though. cause his first punch was pretty good too. show didnt come as hard as he can.

v/ marks.

DaTrusHurtz 01-28-07 11:13 AM

6-1

Marksmen WINS 1-0
§howcase LOSES 0-1


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