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DaTrusHurtz 01-28-07 02:25 PM

7. Wireless (3-0) vs. 8. TEF (8-7)
 


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Heychoo 01-28-07 06:15 PM

10.............

TEF 01-29-07 08:42 PM

Yup...10 It is


asap.

http://community.rapverse.com/editp...tpost&p=3140336
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3141004
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3141005

Heychoo 01-29-07 08:59 PM

idk when i'll drop

i just wrote 18 for LLL

plus i got 2 other matches this week

but i wont no show

-edit in verse here-.

TEF 02-01-07 12:30 PM


Pull The blanket off this homo & his King , I’m beting he’s Queen
Only time wires is on Women Undercovers..Involves a Police Sting
Extreme Champ cuz Fletcher signed out, should feel dissed and hated
He’s used to hand me down belts..
..He’s wearing the pink one that his sister gave him
Wireless should be 2-1 but VS Vitticus he took a technical win
But I havent seen a bitchmove like that, since Techno was in
Lets give him some LLL recognition…for fuckin himself! How?
Making it to a contendership match…
…In a league that’s shutin it’self down
This redneck wansta! He’s a fuckin shit neck punk!
Since he’s from TENNESEE, He should VOLUNTEER to give text up!

Heychoo 02-01-07 01:45 PM

ima key something.


i got this shit holmez, thats with no doubt
yo this dude did so much research im waiting for my biography to come out
don? lol, i can see right through
im pretty sure ur related to don of mics, cuz he could son you
your sig..lmao, some of the wackest shit to date
fucka paintin the town red, stay the fuck away from paint in the first place
im kinda cold now, just laying here in bed
shit dude its snowin in tennessee - i told you not to scratch ur fucking head
im da best der is - and thats the truth
but...
im kinda mad at DTH for making me finish my LBL run against someone wack as u

Restricted 02-01-07 03:06 PM

Aight..

Both of these verses could've been better. I got TEF edging this one out though. I didn't feel much of Wireless's punches, but the ones I did feel, they could've been better set up it took away from the punchlines.

TEF's shit could've been better as well, he had some personals in there so that definitly put his verse up a little.

I felt that if Wireless would've worded and set up his concepts better he would've won this battle.

Favorite Punch from each contender:

TEF:

"Extreme Champ cuz Fletcher signed out, should feel dissed and hated
He’s used to hand me down belts..
..He’s wearing the pink one that his sister gave him"

Wireless:

"i got this shit holmez, thats with no doubt
yo this dude did so much research im waiting for my biography to come out"

Vote - TEF

Area51 02-01-07 04:53 PM

Pull The blanket off this homo & his King , I’m beting he’s Queen
Only time wires is on Women Undercovers..Involves a Police Sting
Extreme Champ cuz Fletcher signed out, should feel dissed and hated
He’s used to hand me down belts..
..He’s wearing the pink one that his sister gave him

vs

your sig..lmao, some of the wackest shit to date
fucka paintin the town red, stay the fuck away from paint in the first place

weak battle, wireless only had 1 bar I liked, and TEF had 2 I liked.. besides those there was nothing that even struck me as decent, so as TEF had 2 decents to Wires 1 he gets this

vote-TEF

KempoMRK 02-14-07 08:37 AM

TEF wins 2-0.

TEF wins (9-7)
Wireless loses (3-1)


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