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Like Father Like Son - Triple_N on the beat!! (will rtf)
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"like father like son" verse1: Para hook: para verse2: para beat: 3n Productions (triple_n) links comin. |
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im listenin now beat sounds pretty nice so far wow its actually pretty hot..........your quality sounds way better......your flow is choppy in somes spots....when you spit you should just let it all out....dont hold it back .....try like practicing your verse listning to yourself in the headphones...that helped me build up my pressense and emotion on the mic.... its a straight track fam....try what i said and u'll see improvment 1 |
word thanks for that feed duke, yea man i def needed to practice it more cause i wrote it real quick and just put it together next day pretty much. practiced a bit but not enough.
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ok you lil snitch ass nig. Peepin' your track. I'ma tell you now before I even listen i expect pure fuckin' wackness from you you lil snitch boy. Aiight beat dope of course. TRIPLE_N DOING THAT SHIT!! "I gotta say something, cuz I respect him alot" OBVIOUSLY HE AINT RESPECT YOU SINCE HE NAMED YOU PARADYCE!!!
your flow sucks, choppy as hell. flow smoother you snitch ass bitch boy. flow off a lot, "When it's a special day I blaze with you" NIGGA STFU HOW ABOUT YOU BLAZE MY ASS YOU FUCKING SNITCH!! your singing on hook sucks. please don't sing again snitch ass bitch. STFU STOP SINGING! DONT YOU LISTEN! STOP!! grouch my ass. I should slap you for saying that. Ancient paradyce, omg stfu already son. By the way your avy is gay too. stfu your talent ain't great. STFU!! use some multis you fuckin' snitch ass nig. DIE SLOW!!!!!!!! fuck, son in his arms? HE should of dropped your fuckin' snitch ass. I feel for your father. peace bitch ass snitch boy. STOP SNITCHING STOP LYING |
You've improved a lot since i last heard you, would leave more feed but im tired, i'll edit this tommorow if i get online
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Willa gets me introuble yet again? ok I didn't snitch all i did was post in your thread sayin how you enver rtf. I don't see why your thread would get closed for that, it's not my fault it's yours. |
ight beats coo but i dont think ur flow was smooth enuff for this beat....so choppy.....delivery is blan.....u needa keep the listener interested......hook is ehhh monotne.....choppy!!!!!!ruins the whole vibe.....i like ur lyrics tho.....overall this was decent at best....
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Good Looks on using my beat man...ok yea man the flow is shaky on this one man..u took a step back here son..you've flowed smoother on other joints...but storyline tracks will do that to you..its hard to have deep flows when telling stories....delivery was blan too man u really need more emotion in ya voice for this one....hook coulda been way better if u flowed it smoother...did 1 take the flow? like rap all 4 bars strait thru? if so u should broke it up an record it in overlapping pieces. Overall man this was a good idea/ an the right type of concept for beat but jus wasn't executed right man u need to polish this one fo real but once again good looks on using my beat....1
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