Is Hip Hop Dyin? ft. Afrok
 

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I'm definitely feeling the message on this one man. The lyrics are on point with the topic. Wasn't really feeling the hook too much. Second dude (I'm guessing Afrok) I wasn't really feeling too much. His flow seemed off a bit. Hook again.....it could have been better if you added some substance to it, like maybe some background adlibs or something....I don't know. Could have also used a third verse.....lol. If you ever need another verse man, hit me up :thumbup:


Good shit though man....

there is a third verse available i just cut it short

beats def nice.....okay i like what your talkin bout even though it's been played. but word thats what most emcee's say about hip-hop. ya delivery is gentle and layed back yup dope. im def feelin the verse. 2nd dude is pretty good but his dubs seem a little tiny notch off in some spots but it's no biggie. his lyrics was tight and delivery was good. nice hook PT overall pretty ill track

rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240045

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yeeahh liked this..like the concept of it as a whole...your flows good..emotion sounds dope...lyrical content is nice.."truth is before the record deal, they was dead broke"..yeerr your verse is solid...like the hook, works pretty well for me..feelin that afrok guy aswell, he reminds me of someone, i just cant think of who it is haha...yeer not much to crit on his verse either, pretty much up to par..yeerr good shit this, feelin the beat aswell :thumbup:

Listenin'...

beat is hot...

I feel yo lyrics..n flow is good, nuttin rlly bad..real talk shit...i can't get over how dope the beat is..

verse is dope..

AW MAN..hook shuda had a singer...but still decent..

2nd dude is nice 2..flow is nice..like voice...

u said theres space on 3rd..get at me man.,.if u want

yo this shit is sick as hell...i actaully downloaded those beat not to long ago....
"truth is before the record deal, they was dead broke"
dope shit man..

check me out when u get a chance:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240074

beat is coo.....voice is coo but i dunno jus doesnt appeal to me....delivery is coo but on some parts it was a lil monotone......the hook could been better mixed....sounds a lil muffled to me and plain....next dude sounds like a lower pitched enygma.....flow is ight but i dunno about the flow lyrics is coo......hook again......overall this was ight....nuthin i wuld bump tho......gud shit..pz

thanks for all the feed

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