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Diet Coke 02-19-07 05:31 AM

Group B: §howcase vs. SerB
 
Its week 1 of this 6 week season. Since there is only 24 competing this year, you'll have to drop extra hard to make the playoffs. Let's see what you can do..

Battler #1: §howcase
Battler #2: SerB

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.

§howcase 02-19-07 05:29 PM

Check. ./././././

§howcase 02-19-07 11:41 PM

Of nines, I hold a pair popping off...ready to rape fools,
SerB holds a pear too...so his fruity ass would have something to relate to.

SerB 02-23-07 09:51 PM

you raping fools the only time ur penis gets touched, showcase
dudes so fuckin ugly that all the dogs in the hood smell his face.


SC sucks @ text, you won't come 1st,2nd but fith
beat you in dirt so bad untill you lay next to anna nicole smith.

§howcase 02-24-07 12:19 AM

SMH.

It's a stupid thing to step to me, you're about to lose the betting,
Until the voters are asking "why-ser"...which is something you're not getting.


Votes Up.

Cola 02-24-07 01:13 AM

i'd break this all down...but in all honesty Serb got served hard..

Serb gotta step his shit up...

Sean Gunner 02-24-07 01:14 PM

Of nines, I hold a pair popping off...ready to rape fools,
SerB holds a pear too...so his fruity ass would have something to relate to.
-Ok wordplay
It's a stupid thing to step to me, you're about to lose the betting,
Until the voters are asking "why-ser"...which is something you're not getting.
- Haha, I liked this wordplay.

you raping fools the only time ur penis gets touched, showcase
dudes so fuckin ugly that all the dogs in the hood smell his face.
-Not hittin, bad setup.
SC sucks @ text, you won't come 1st,2nd but fith
beat you in dirt so bad untill you lay next to anna nicole smith.
-Not original, not that hard hittin either.

v-Show

Sureloc Holmes 02-24-07 04:23 PM

I don't really think a breakdown is even needed.

V- Showcase

Reason:
for not sucking

Restricted 02-24-07 08:32 PM

Of nines, I hold a pair popping off...ready to rape fools,
SerB holds a pear too...so his fruity ass would have something to relate to.
Nah..
It's a stupid thing to step to me, you're about to lose the betting,
Until the voters are asking "why-ser"...which is something you're not getting.
Wordplay, but not really hard hitting..

Vs.

you raping fools the only time ur penis gets touched, showcase
dudes so fuckin ugly that all the dogs in the hood smell his face.
Nah..this was horrible..
SC sucks @ text, you won't come 1st,2nd but fith
beat you in dirt so bad untill you lay next to anna nicole smith.
Nah..same as first..


Vote - Show for having some actual concepts and punches in his verse. Serb you just gotta put in some metaphors and concepts, and then work on your wordplay. After that you'll start putting up wins. As for Show, you need to just work on bettering your ideas.

§howcase 02-24-07 08:49 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240096
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240099
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240100

DaTrusHurtz 02-25-07 05:12 PM

Of nines, I hold a pair popping off...ready to rape fools,
SerB holds a pear too...so his fruity ass would have something to relate to.
seen pear wordplay so this was only so good, but ya used it okay

vs.

you raping fools the only time ur penis gets touched, showcase
dudes so fuckin ugly that all the dogs in the hood smell his face.
wow, this was terrible, lol
SC sucks @ text, you won't come 1st,2nd but fith
beat you in dirt so bad untill you lay next to anna nicole smith.
anna nicole lines are played n' this was too simple

vs.

It's a stupid thing to step to me, you're about to lose the betting,
Until the voters are asking "why-ser"...which is something you're not getting.
dope nameplay, really nicely done

Showcase got this... easily

Vote - Showcase

Brandon Cee 02-25-07 08:16 PM

v/Show

Harder punches and both of his were aiight, while Serb's punches both sucked

Diet Coke 02-26-07 02:06 PM

Showcase wins.

Battle closed.


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