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DaTrusHurtz 02-22-07 11:03 AM

Sureloc Holmes (1-1) vs. GKillaz05 (1-1)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


NFL Team Battles

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Sureloc Holmes

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GKillaz05


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In this battle, you will be dissing the team of your opponent.

Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
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GKillaz05 02-22-07 05:37 PM

damn i wanted to battle the raiders, iight well check in.. good luck fam.

DaTrusHurtz 02-22-07 08:22 PM

^^^ Done. You are now battling Sureloc Holmes and the raiders

Sureloc Holmes 02-23-07 07:24 PM

uh...damn, i thought i checked into this. uh...check.

Sureloc Holmes 02-25-07 07:51 PM

i'll set your offensive lines on fire hoe, this ain't concerning puss
you gonna be one hell of a religious team when you met with burning Bush
yeah my record wasn't much, in fact, it was quite gory
but I won't have to beat your ass...
cuz my fans will fight for me
and you may got a nice team, but you ain't the boss, what
i mean, hurricane katrina is a metaphor in itself for why you're washed up
my team is great, i been more and then
cuz I can go at QB so hard...
I'm bound to start up the legendary Bridge Wars again
i hand losses to fags, with the rhythm i'm given
but we all know your a disaster, like the city you live in...




Yo thats all I could do. I'm out.

GKillaz05 02-25-07 09:20 PM

Pickin' the Raiders for your team, helps me easily hand ya da loss//
What kind of team loses every fuckin' game wit' the legendary Randy Moss//
Did you plan to ruin his career, wit' your teams weak ass offence//
Raiders have so many interceptions, you cant even blame da defence//
You cant hold the N-O, down.. just cuz our whole city drowned//
We rebuilt so quick, and now the saints are the talk of the town//
And you boastin' about fans man, name one dude that dont hate ya//
People on the free agent list, dont even wanna be a fuckin raidah//
Next year the title is ours....., well your team for sure will blow...//
So buyin NO season tickets, is the only way you'll see a superbowl//


10mins, n im out... fuck dadrus that lame, fuckin' sayin' dudes above me. Fuckin read his shit man, and keep tellin' yourself that.. im out. word.

Restricted 02-25-07 09:41 PM

Sureloc Holmes:
and you may got a nice team, but you ain't the boss, what
i mean, hurricane katrina is a metaphor in itself for why you're washed up
i hand losses to fags, with the rhythm i'm given
but we all know your a disaster, like the city you live in...

Vs.

GKillaz05:
Pickin' the Raiders for your team, helps me easily hand ya da loss//
What kind of team loses every fuckin' game wit' the legendary Randy Moss//
And you boastin' about fans man, name one dude that dont hate ya//
People on the free agent list, dont even wanna be a fuckin raidah//
Next year the title is ours....., well your team for sure will blow...//
So buyin NO season tickets, is the only way you'll see a superbowl//

Vote - GKillaz. I had to go with consistency and I feel that GKillaz had more of that in his verse, even with the two fillers supplied. Sureloc had two good punches but the rest were garbage.

GKillaz05 02-25-07 09:44 PM

yeah word man, and lmao and the only 2 bars you liked of his having nothin' to do with the New Orlean Saints, had more to do with just New Orleans. Maybe he thought it was state vs state battle. haha, anywayz thx for the vote.. lets get some more.. still cant wait to see what dadumbass has to say.

ThatsWhatSheSaid 02-25-07 10:27 PM

Sureloc
i'll set your offensive lines on fire hoe, this ain't concerning puss
you gonna be one hell of a religious team when you met with burning Bush
^_lol
yeah my record wasn't much, in fact, it was quite gory
but I won't have to beat your ass...
cuz my fans will fight for me
^-..ok
and you may got a nice team, but you ain't the boss, what
i mean, hurricane katrina is a metaphor in itself for why you're washed up
^-decent
my team is great, i been more and then
cuz I can go at QB so hard...
I'm bound to start up the legendary Bridge Wars again
^-ok
i hand losses to fags, with the rhythm i'm given
but we all know your a disaster, like the city you live in...
^- i like it


GKilla
Pickin' the Raiders for your team, helps me easily hand ya da loss//
What kind of team loses every fuckin' game wit' the legendary Randy Moss//
^-lol good question
Did you plan to ruin his career, wit' your teams weak ass offence//
Raiders have so many interceptions, you cant even blame da defence//
^- didnt like so much
You cant hold the N-O, down.. just cuz our whole city drowned//
We rebuilt so quick, and now the saints are the talk of the town//
^- yeah but where the punches
And you boastin' about fans man, name one dude that dont hate ya//
People on the free agent list, dont even wanna be a fuckin raidah//
^- ok
Next year the title is ours....., well your team for sure will blow...//
So buyin NO season tickets, is the only way you'll see a superbowl//
^- didnt come with as good a closer as sureloc
Overal - both came ok, Sureloc came with more punches and i like the wordplay, Gkilla had some good lines but his verse needed more direct punches n he didnt have that, both flowed ok and each had unique structure but i gotta give the vote to Suireloc

Vote- Sureloc

GKillaz05 02-25-07 10:46 PM

dude you need to understand something, this battle was the NO Saints vs the Oakland Raidahz, now should you not be dissin' things about the team, and the game football, not rappin' about how the NO had a hurricane? It pisses me off when someone says that his closer was better then mine, when mine was on topic.. so even if it was worse, it should still deserve the win for stayin' on topic! nah mean?.. but good looks on the vote son, 1-1.

Heychoo 02-25-07 11:08 PM

and you may got a nice team, but you ain't the boss, what
i mean, hurricane katrina is a metaphor in itself for why you're washed up

vs

nothing

gkilla just blows, he sucks honestly..none of his shit was good, randy moss isnt even legendary lmao...sureloc didnt come that dope, his only good line was the washed up one. blehhhhhhh battle, both step ya game up. im sure killa will bitch about my vote, but its truth.

GKillaz05 02-25-07 11:21 PM

I seriously could give a fuck less homie, I dont try for this stupid league, and the only lines any of you are feelin' of his dissed New Orleans good, but not so much the Saints.

FlowIntelligent. 02-26-07 12:30 AM

I know i aint voting but gkillaz u need to work on your concepts.. you been on RV since 04 and you still spittin elementary concepts.. just constructive criticism

uncle phil 02-26-07 09:07 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
I seriously could give a fuck less homie, I dont try for this stupid league, and the only lines any of you are feelin' of his dissed New Orleans good, but not so much the Saints.


You dont try or care bout this stupid league but your gay ass replies after every vote shut up... an your a bitch for stealin the saints from me too... ill edit a vote later :)

ThatsWhatSheSaid 02-26-07 09:59 AM

Gkilla - He dissed your team he was just doing it indirectly, i caught that, like..
"i hand losses to fags, with the rhythm i'm given
but we all know your a disaster, like the city you live in..."

Yeah hes talking about the after effect disaster of katrina, but hes dissin your team when he does it, he just doesnt say the names or the team name but its not like he didnt diss your team, your punches were to basic for me, you rhymed offense and defense, to words that end the same but they dont rhyme, na mean? And why join the league if your just going to shit all over it and not try? The whole point of text is to sharpen your skills so if your posting stuff like this what advantage does it have for you? None.. anyways no hate but dont get at me for my votes because i have reasons for what i do, anyways peace


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