Johnny Voltaire aka Paranoid - "Around The World" (will rtf)
 

www.myspace.com/paranoidxl

Verses: Voltaire
Hooks: Voltaire
Beat: Spontane

hit me with ya links I'll rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3147443
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3147441

ur flow was stiff on this...and you did not own the mic...ur presence was timid...and u did not sound confident


beat is repetitive and lackluster


wasn't feelin it


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definately seems like your opening was read off paper like when u say words like son it doesn t sound real ionno yea u got the 4x4 flow stiff as wood dawg u gotta roll some of that shit off ya toungue man listen to some prominant rappers gather a vibe of some different steez and mould your own like listen to the way u say vertibrate ur allowed to use pauses for effect man i will say ur gettin better but u gotta stepo ut the box

I sussed this...wasnt too bad, just practice recording techniques.

Keep at it man, time will tell the difference.

Lol I said Verdabray not Verdabrate lol. meh I just didnt try as hard on this one I def coulda did it better. but thanks for the feed.