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DaTrusHurtz 03-01-07 12:40 PM

-Troublesome- (1-0) vs. Ancel (1-0)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Super Hero and Super Villain Battles

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-Troublesome- as Spiderman

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Ancel as Ash Catchem


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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- Troublesome - 03-01-07 01:16 PM

roflz

16........

Ancel. 03-02-07 11:19 AM

I can't lose! Let's go pikachu!.

lmao jk, 16 is cool.


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3149074
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3149076
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3149077

Ancel. 03-03-07 11:15 PM

This guys an obvious burn out, noone here will doubt the dudes lame
'Cause all it took to fall in love was..."Hi my name is Mary Jane"
But fuck that you don't get hoes, The lotion keeps you happy in the pants
Because besides jackin off the only white shit from you is comin out your hands
Bitch your not in the race'n, you need to make up for your mistakes kid
Dude you reep what you sow, And for you that's a sticky situation
You never did spit sick, and kid if you really want me to be honest
the ONLY fucking venom you've got is the guy featured in your comics
Bitches drive my stick shift, they love how the dick couldnt get any harder
& They cum then get kicked out my crib, and then she'll let your peter parker
Bitch i'll collapse your chances, nobody sees your bars as evil
"cause you couldn't picture yourself winning with a job at the daily bugle


went 12.....

- Troublesome - 03-06-07 10:08 PM

This is no comp, it aint fair...ya merrits aint even relevant
While i'm out saving the city...you're playin with that little fuckin yellow thing
This fella stinks, my Marvel homies are puttin all you freaks on blast 'n...
Fuck watchin Pokemon...all I gotta do is throw fists to see Ash Catch em
I sat scratchin...my head when threads went up, my luck was crushed and smeared
Cuz I voted for Super Heroes vs. Villains...not Super Heroes vs. Little Fuckin Queers
You're outta place, fuckin virgin, you'd never find a bitch to sleep with you
They don't need to kidnap ya buddy to die laughin when they take a Pik at chu
Cuz ya look goofy as hell, and you aint hard, why you lookin stout?
Whenever Ash starts to get too big...people are always quick to put you out
They wonder how I swing from buildings and shoot webs while rushin through
Anime wondering why these crazy Japs keep drawing faggot fucks like you

§howcase 03-07-07 04:03 PM

You never did spit sick, and kid if you really want me to be honest
the ONLY fucking venom you've got is the guy featured in your comics

vs.

This fella stinks, my Marvel homies are puttin all you freaks on blast 'n...
Fuck watchin Pokemon...all I gotta do is throw fists to see Ash Catch em
I sat scratchin...my head when threads went up, my luck was crushed and smeared
Cuz I voted for Super Heroes vs. Villains...not Super Heroes vs. Little Fuckin Queers


Meh, Ancel didn't come with much here. I liked a couple of his punches, but a lot were pointless and weak. Trouble on the other hand had some okay lines and then some pretty nice shots in his verse. A couple were also off, but mostly they all hit. That's why, based on that consistancy and the fact that he had more quotables, I gotta give my vote to him.

V/ -Troublesome-

Alphabetized 03-07-07 04:10 PM

You never did spit sick, and kid if you really want me to be honest
the ONLY fucking venom you've got is the guy featured in your comics
^ That was pretty cool, better than everything else you had by a lot.

VS.

This fella stinks, my Marvel homies are puttin all you freaks on blast 'n...
Fuck watchin Pokemon...all I gotta do is throw fists to see Ash Catch em
^ Cool flip with the nameplay.

I sat scratchin...my head when threads went up, my luck was crushed and smeared
Cuz I voted for Super Heroes vs. Villains...not Super Heroes vs. Little Fuckin Queers
^ Seems basic.. but it comes out pretty funny and sort of blunt.

Vote Troublesome for 1 more quoteable.

- Troublesome - 03-07-07 07:09 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240356
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240358
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240353
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240350

"O RLY?" 03-07-07 08:59 PM

You never did spit sick, and kid if you really want me to be honest
the ONLY fucking venom you've got is the guy featured in your comics
Bitches drive my stick shift, they love how the dick couldnt get any harder
& They cum then get kicked out my crib, and then she'll let your peter parker
But fuck that you don't get hoes, The lotion keeps you happy in the pants
Because besides jackin off the only white shit from you is comin out your hands

VS.

This fella stinks, my Marvel homies are puttin all you freaks on blast 'n...
Fuck watchin Pokemon...all I gotta do is throw fists to see Ash Catch em
You're outta place, fuckin virgin, you'd never find a bitch to sleep with you
They don't need to kidnap ya buddy to die laughin when they take a Pik at chu

i have it as 3-2.. pretty good consistancy, i thought dissing Ash would be easier that dissing spider man also.. so ancel kind of had the edge right away for me..

V/ Ancle

Prycele$$ 03-07-07 10:37 PM

My bad bout no quote..
my Copy and paste aint workin and stuff..

but

Ancel.. you aint really have nuthin appealin in your verse.. i WTF'd at a few lines..

Troublesome.. you had a few good lines.. i like ya style.. keep it up..

vote: Trouble..

tiggobitties 03-07-07 10:42 PM

trouble some won this battle in every category....ancle dragged on the "cum and dick" punch too long and should have just came harder overall

v/troublesome

M the Literal 03-07-07 11:09 PM

Ancel's stuff was kinda one-note, though I think he had a better rhythm. Trouble had some harder punches in there, but there were a few heavy slant rhymes that had no real payoff. No jaw-smashers in this one, but Trouble landed harder stuff consistently. Liked that both guys stayed pretty much on topic the whole way through.

Vote: Troublesome

DaTrusHurtz 03-08-07 01:14 PM

You never did spit sick, and kid if you really want me to be honest
the ONLY fucking venom you've got is the guy featured in your comics

vs.

This is no comp, it aint fair...ya merrits aint even relevant
While i'm out saving the city...you're playin with that little fuckin yellow thing
This fella stinks, my Marvel homies are puttin all you freaks on blast 'n...
Fuck watchin Pokemon...all I gotta do is throw fists to see Ash Catch em
I sat scratchin...my head when threads went up, my luck was crushed and smeared
Cuz I voted for Super Heroes vs. Villains...not Super Heroes vs. Little Fuckin Queers

Ancel, u didn't come as good as u can, but the Venom shit was nice. Trouble, u had a tight verse. First 3 bars were fire, especially the little fucking queers line, lol @ that shit. Closed out fairly consistent as well, I think u got this one for sure.

Vote - -Troublesome-

DaTrusHurtz 03-08-07 01:14 PM

-Troublesome- wins 6-1

-Troublesome- WINS 2-0
Ancel LOSES 1-1


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