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Valiant 03-08-07 03:30 PM

P.A. vs Shiest
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines (5 bars)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-11-07 at 03:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-08-07 03:30 PM

Shiest has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-07 03:30 PM.

Valiant 03-08-07 04:14 PM

Look,
We can see P.A's making a Public Annoucement
By coming out the closest, this faggots about it
Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links
Speaking of Threads your verses are deemed wack
'Cos The only thing you eat is your negative Feedback
I could let you win this battle with a minimal payment
'Cos it insults me battling foes who spits from theirs anus
Ripping up herbs should be a bill passed to the constitute
For your words mean shit...
...Like Blood Stained Tampons of a Prostitute...

~1~

System 03-08-07 09:39 PM

P.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-07 09:39 PM.

P.A. 03-09-07 11:36 AM

Hey Yo Shiest, P.a. Defenitly To Nice, I Opperate On Artist With This Verbal Device...
Thats A Formal Introduction, Im Here Fo Ur Mic,treat You Like Prison Nigga, Make U My Wife...
Have U Sellin Ur Body So I Can Make It Through Life,
Pedal Hard On U Homie, Just Like A Bike...
Come To Ground Zero And Bring Out Da Light,
I Dont Need To Be Blood Or Crip To Make Me Feel Safe In My Life...
I Dont Need To Bring Another Nigga To A Gun Fight, Just Come Out Swinging All Lefts And Rights...
And You 7-0 And Im 0-0, When U Seen My Flow, Ur Self-esteem Went Low...
Young Boy, I Heard U Aint Even Got Da Denerio, U Probally Dont Even Have A Connection Down There In Ground Zero...
Ill Bring Da Snow And Make It Below Zero, Ill Love To Open Up His Frame, Give A Lost To This Lame...
Treat Him Like A Dame, Destory Him With My Brain, Deadly Flow Homie, To Hard To Tame...
Remember This Pimpin, Me And U Aint Da Same, U Just A Pawn, Im Da King Of This Game...

Civil. 03-11-07 12:09 AM

Voted For: P.A.

Sheist. You had 1 Good bar man. and you worded that shit terribly. your punches were weak, personals was eh. Only one you had was the one about his open mics...wordplay n concepts were def. weak


P.A.- Ha. i liked your wordplay man. Straight sounds like some street shit. The structure was off, but you still killed it in personals. You def. talked shit about everything you could, bein how new you are. shorten your lines up a lil bit, but other then that you good.

v/P.A.

GKillaz05 03-18-07 09:00 PM

Voted For: Shiest

PA:
nothin

vs

Shiest:
Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links



this was a pretty weak battle, but i am goin' to have to give this to Shi for havin the best line in this battle.!

Jay 3rd 03-25-07 11:29 PM

Voted For: Shiest

this shit wasnt even a battle.. PA seems liek a rookie man.. probably why he 0-0 but sheist took it wit ease man..

technique 03-30-07 08:57 PM

Voted For: Shiest

I like this verse better cuz it was overall more harder. I like some of your wordplay and some lines were better then others. Pa's verse was still good but i felt this one slightly beat it.

M&rk 04-01-07 12:26 AM

Voted For: Shiest


Hey Yo Shiest, P.a. Defenitly To Nice, I Opperate On Artist With This Verbal Device...
Thats A Formal Introduction, Im Here Fo Ur Mic,treat You Like Prison Nigga, Make U My Wife...
***no wordplay and just a played out concept
Have U Sellin Ur Body So I Can Make It Through Life,
Pedal Hard On U Homie, Just Like A Bike...
Come To Ground Zero And Bring Out Da Light,
(((um what, no punch at all
I Dont Need To Be Blood Or Crip To Make Me Feel Safe In My Life...
I Dont Need To Bring Another Nigga To A Gun Fight, Just Come Out Swinging All Lefts And Rights...
***these are like lyrics with no punch
And You 7-0 And Im 0-0, When U Seen My Flow, Ur Self-esteem Went Low...
Young Boy, I Heard U Aint Even Got Da Denerio, U Probally Dont Even Have A Connection Down There In Ground Zero...
***stretched and the da nero wordplay woulda been dope but u didn’t use it
Ill Bring Da Snow And Make It Below Zero, Ill Love To Open Up His Frame, Give A Lost To This Lame...
Treat Him Like A Dame, Destory Him With My Brain, Deadly Flow Homie, To Hard To Tame...

Remember This Pimpin, Me And U Aint Da Same, U Just A Pawn, Im Da King Of This Game...
)))u gotta have wordplay and a diss here son
..
vs.
..
Look,
We can see P.A's making a Public Annoucement
By coming out the closest, this faggots about it
Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links
&&& pretty dope, good line here w/ the close off wordplay
Speaking of Threads your verses are deemed wack
'Cos The only thing you eat is your negative Feedback
***lame, how is the only thing u eat being feedback a diss. If your lead in was like, dude too poor to buy a meal or sumin it would be a diss
I could let you win this battle with a minimal payment
'Cos it insults me battling foes who spits from theirs anus
((((lame, cuz zeke says so
Ripping up herbs should be a bill passed to the constitute
For your words mean shit...
...Like Blood Stained Tampons of a Prostitute...
()()))))how does words meaning shit and prostitues tampons have anything in common?... alme cuz zeke says so

vote- shiest…. For….
Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links
^^^ the one actual punch in the battle

DaTrusHurtz 04-02-07 03:02 PM

Voted For: Shiest

Homie's soft, ur humps are nothing without Kink
Thats why girls close you off...
...More than Open Mic Threads Without Links

vs.

Nothing

Pretty weak battle, that 1 line I quoted from Sheist was pretty good, but the rest was ehh, too basic. Then again, PA came really wack. His shit was newbish and looked like a freestyle and not a battle. All he did was self-hype himself so thats why he lost.

Vote - Shiest


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