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Lay. 03-11-07 11:56 PM

Freestyle
 
Ey yo..check this
I come to crush verses and eliminate herbs from this site
Without much wordage I'll discrimnate ya words like its a right
Go head n' list a fight set it up, cuz I need someone to crush
Me without takin lives is like the adrenaline without the rush
I doubt ya touch..ya got no finesse..ya a fail ya thats transparent
Some noobs only positive feed back..is jus e-mails from there parents
I do'nt even have to battle..dispatch your verses n' a laugh disperses
I leave mc's on theirs knees beggin fo mercy..like mass at churches
I smash these herbs kid and there is no need for the effort man
Cuz wit ya reputation on RV you could battle a chick and be the lesser man
God could bless ya plan and somehow it could get mixed in the hectic
After scopin ya verse..last time i seen so much shit i was fixin the septic
Ya hopes for the win i wrecked it like its what i came to do
This grimey cat couldn't get a W if somebody won and was framin you
I can't name this dude..he'd be embarrassed and probably laughed at
He must write wit one butt cheek..cuz all of his verses are half assed
...ahh i was boredd and was just rambling..but lets get passed that
-Lay Fear


READ THE RULES!!

iRRaTioNaL 03-15-07 08:21 PM

I Liked Tha Perspective How U Were Rappin To Sum1 Later On In Tha Verse....... Good Way To Present Yaself...... Ur Obviously More Of A Battler.... Sum Good Subliminals In There............... I Couldnt Catch Tha Flow So Maybe U Might Wana Work On That........


Its A Str8 Freestlye Tho Man Keep Spittin


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