15. M The Literal (1-0) vs. 16. Trey MethodZ (0-1)
 

Check, fifteen.

EDIT: Just to clarify, I don't mean fifteen lines, I just needed to hit fifteen characters so it would take my post.

checkin match me

Face down - a position that you're used to
Getting whipped just like the wrong end of a pistol
Let's get this clear as crystal - you're prone because you like it
Try to tell everyone you're hard? We don't buy it
The only thing raw about you is your back
You're a sick motherfucker, ya get off on the whipcrack
With a switch - you're the only willing prison bitch
Straight up fillet* you like you were a landed fish
Bet you wish that the spectator would join in
We know you ain't talking cars when you say "I like rims"
Ya won a medal for the Best Tossed Caesar
They'll understand - take a breather, 'cause I bet your knees hurt

* - fillet/flay

see some ppl go to jail cuz of felonys..some just to get hard
the expression on ya face sum's up your reason to go behind bars
you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different
he get's takin advantge of...cause you too frail
since you literally play the roll of being a stuffed kid in jail
or maybe jails ya life, you may enjoy it what the hell
he aint taking about phones when you say i need to cop a cell
got ya arms up, cause your controlled by a fag named jim
could the guy with his hand up ya ass be ya man or you cheating on him
if you not sucking dick, that cell to you is a bore
the bar in the middle of ya face shows exactly what your waiting for

you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different

vs.

Nothing

Pretty blah battle here, you guys gotta step it up as there was like no creativity in this battle at all. Uhh, there wasn't anything particularly quotable in this battle, but Trey had the best bar and was more consistent so I'm giving this to him, but you guys gotta add more wit to your bars rather than just stating shit so blandly.

Vote - Trey Methodz

M-some good rhyme schemes, multies, and flow, but i just wasnt feelin the overall vibe...opener and closeres were also mediocre...i think this verse had a lot of potential but you stayed on the whole "perverted prisoner" thing way to long...

Trey-alright...i thought the other verse focused too much on the perverted and sexual part of jail but this entire verse is based on that...some alright rhyme schemes but thats about it...i wasnt really feelin ne punchez or the opener or closer or vocab or wordplay...this verse could be improved a lot

overall-id say M took this battle...both had some decent things in their verses, but M's was just slightly better...Trey also had a lot of random punches and lines (ex: "fam named jim")...closer than i thought itd be tho

v/M the literal

you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different

^^ Only good punch of the battle. M came wack, but at least he had good flow. Everyone of Trey's bars was better so again, I don't have anything other than that to say. This was a clear victory.

V/ Trey MethodZ

I'll have my links up tomorrow.

Face down - a position that you're used to
Getting whipped just like the wrong end of a pistol
^^mehh
Let's get this clear as crystal - you're prone because you like it
Try to tell everyone you're hard? We don't buy it
^^nah.. bland as hell
The only thing raw about you is your back
You're a sick motherfucker, ya get off on the whipcrack
^^no
With a switch - you're the only willing prison bitch
Straight up fillet* you like you were a landed fish
^^nah, ok concept tho..
Bet you wish that the spectator would join in
We know you ain't talking cars when you say "I like rims"
^^lol, ok
Ya won a medal for the Best Tossed Caesar
They'll understand - take a breather, 'cause I bet your knees hurt
^^iight
wording pulled up in the end, in the begginin tho it wasnt harsh or had any cleverness to it. but then the concepts started showing so i'll give you that.

vs

see some ppl go to jail cuz of felonys..some just to get hard
the expression on ya face sum's up your reason to go behind bars'
^^iight
you get it rough from the back when other inmates hit it
bleed so hard you turned the color of the cell bars different
^^ok
he get's takin advantge of...cause you too frail
since you literally play the roll of being a stuffed kid in jail
^^lol, ok
or maybe jails ya life, you may enjoy it what the hell
he aint taking about phones when you say i need to cop a cell
^^ok
got ya arms up, cause your controlled by a fag named jim
could the guy with his hand up ya ass be ya man or you cheating on him
^^nah
if you not sucking dick, that cell to you is a bore
the bar in the middle of ya face shows exactly what your waiting for
^^lol
more impact here, alot of more thought out concepts and the wording wasnt bad at all, it was actually comical.. pretty coo punches

v/Trey MethodZ

Trey Methodz wins 3-1

Trey MethodZ WINS 1-1
M The Literal LOSES 1-1