7. Popcorn (1-0) vs. 8. Alphabetized (1-0)
 

...what in the hell? lmao @ this battle.


check chek. g/l

Headed to jail, but this isn't the longest yard.
I see you with your head down...but prayin' wont save you from my bars.
My punches like alcohol...leave you trashed & ruined.
You ain't no hardcore felon...shit you dressed like you about attend a class reunion.
Dog, don't you see our weapons...we're meant to hurt guys.
We've been raised in prisons...dog its looks like its your f*ckin' first time!
Scared to look...got your eyes closed, mouth shut.
We're here for life...you an overnighter with ya' butt-buddies waiting out front.
These tools ain't for diggin'...they're to pound chumps.
I see you surrounded by police...but they too scared to come 'round us!!
Yeah it's an old pic...might be thinkin' that these kids need clothes.
But just look...you got caught on survailance while we got our VICTORY POSE!!!





...shit idk...thats all i could up with lmao!!

I'd abuse this useless piece of shit, but that'd probably just help
Hes already got the shovel out to dig his fuckin grave himself!
i've been recently released... due to some hostile behavior
But after I murder you, i wont do 20-life.. just the world a favor
I don't care about you, and it's obvious your not on top
cuz im only giving you the boot.. before yours rot the fuck off
Your just a grimey fag... always in the mood to be feelin men
S'why theres no surprise u droppin shabby bars... ur fuckin wearin them
It seems like you been slacking... s'why imma leave you really hurt
I'd give u a hand with your diggen.. so the kid on the right could do his work
You been to prison, and mad fucking bitchy.. like its a fucking shock?
I'm just guessing you woke up on the wrong side of Tyrone's cock

Keyed.

Uppin just cuz people usually only vote when they see 4 posts in a thread.

This is my check. Lol.

pop-nice verse, pretty solid...kinda played, but good opener ne way...gerat closer, shyt was nice...flow was prolly the only thing that needed some work...good punches and werdplay

alpha-decent opener...didnt like the closer tho bro..the line about his boots fallin off coulda been real ill if you would rhymed it better or chose some diffreerent words...

good battle

v/popcorn

Your just a grimey fag... always in the mood to be feelin men
S'why theres no surprise u droppin shabby bars... ur fuckin wearin them

vs.


i didnt really see anything creative pop? wtf? ehhh.

v/alpha

OMG. No contest, Alpha gets my vote with eaaaaase. He just made reading all those other sub-par verses worth it. Other than a couple of punches, his whole verse was fire. Keep at it duke, you already look like a threat. Pop, usually you come better, but what you had this time was uncreative and pretty badly worded. That's why Alpha gets my vote.

V/ Alphabetized

Headed to jail, but this isn't the longest yard.
I see you with your head down...but prayin' wont save you from my bars.
^^meh
My punches like alcohol...leave you trashed & ruined.
You ain't no hardcore felon...shit you dressed like you about attend a class reunion.
^^coo
Dog, don't you see our weapons...we're meant to hurt guys.
We've been raised in prisons...dog its looks like its your f*ckin' first time!
^^nah
Scared to look...got your eyes closed, mouth shut.
We're here for life...you an overnighter with ya' butt-buddies waiting out front.
^^ehh, iight
These tools ain't for diggin'...they're to pound chumps.
I see you surrounded by police...but they too scared to come 'round us!!
^^iight
Yeah it's an old pic...might be thinkin' that these kids need clothes.
But just look...you got caught on survailance while we got our VICTORY POSE!!!
^^lol... wat a racist ass pic
decent verse, some punches hit, some didnt.. but you held an overall cool consistency.. i think you could have done more with the use of the pic

vs

I'd abuse this useless piece of shit, but that'd probably just help
Hes already got the shovel out to dig his fuckin grave himself!
^^its over
i've been recently released... due to some hostile behavior
But after I murder you, i wont do 20-life.. just the world a favor
^^lmao
I don't care about you, and it's obvious your not on top
cuz im only giving you the boot.. before yours rot the fuck off
^^meh
Your just a grimey fag... always in the mood to be feelin men
S'why theres no surprise u droppin shabby bars... ur fuckin wearin them
^^lol... nice
It seems like you been slacking... s'why imma leave you really hurt
I'd give u a hand with your diggen.. so the kid on the right could do his work
^^ok
You been to prison, and mad fucking bitchy.. like its a fucking shock?
I'm just guessing you woke up on the wrong side of Tyrone's cock
^^lol, you grimey ass nigga
nice verse here alpha, i was feelin the creativity you put into some of the punches. i liked the opener and shabby bars line.. keep this up alphie

v/Alphabetized

My punches like alcohol...leave you trashed & ruined.
You ain't no hardcore felon...shit you dressed like you about attend a class reunion.

vs.

I'd abuse this useless piece of shit, but that'd probably just help
Hes already got the shovel out to dig his fuckin grave himself!

Pretty close battle here. Both verses lacked a bit in creativity, but weren't too bad. Popcorn only thing i didn't like in ur verse was u kinda dissed ur boys a lot. U put a good spin on things like on how much of a hardass u guys are, but really i think it hurt ya. Alpha was more consistent, I got him here.

Vote - Alpha

Alpha wins 4-1

Alphabetized WINS 2-0
Popcorn LOSES 1-1