"Throw Ya W's Up" reppin the midwest, hot solo, will rtf!!!!
 

www.myspace.com/paranoidxl

first verse: para
hook: para
2nd verse: para
beat: dj z (my homie)

word leave some feed. i'll rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3154758
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3154756

Is this a Da Band beat?

ugh

made me have flashbacks to Dylan...ugh


UGH


good flow on the beat...


sounds almost like a freestyle tho


pretty decent soundin bro


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^you left feed on the wrong track lol

lool..

yeah i like what u did with it b..sorry i cudn't get on the shit..but u already kno best track i've heard from u..flow good. and delivery...hook i wasnt feelin :P other than that hot shit..1

I listened to this about 2-3 times. And it's on as Im writing. First off, the beat aint bad. I wouldn't mind making a track on something like this, but.. It's a bit slow tempo for me. Lyrically its a phat song, I like what you're saying, it all make sence, and stays on the topic you were shooting for. The flow is good, very good. Just a little to slow for me. Like the quality as well.

Overall I liked this song. I might even add it to my playlist. Lol. Wasn't to many flaws. The only thing that irritates me a bit is it's..... Slow. But that's your style. Do what you do. It's still a good song, regaurdless. Keep it up.

Rtf,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241113
Thanks bro.

thanks duke but nah i aint used to these slow temp beats. I been workin on adaptin must be workin too anyway thanks for the props.

ight well your quality sounds better thats a plus....but you seem hesatant like theres not much flow, just you sayin things.....are you still reading?.....you are still annunciating things too much....the hook gets blah.....the toilet seat line is played....i unno i dont like this that much...the beat is good, but repatative...needs more in it....not that bad still not there yet, you are improving tho

rtf.............................................

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