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Been A Long Time...speats-get Fucked Up With Me!
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iight uppin....
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I'm writing this response as I'm listening to it. This is the 3rd time I have. I'm feelin the beat. It definatly goes along with the theme, and that sound of someone takin a hit in the backround is phat. Lyrically you stayed with the topic you intended. The hook is intense lol. The flow is nice, goes really well with your rhyme scheme. There was nothing really choppy in this. Don't get me wrong though. It's not perfect, you can work on speakin a little more clear. And what you say can always be better, same with my songs and everyone else's.
Overall: I'll give it like a 7-8/10. I liked it to tell you the truth. It's not alot like my style, but I was feelin it. Good job man. Rtf, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241113 Thanks man. |
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beats not bad...kinda west coastish........
quality not bad....u still sound kinda uncomfortable on the mic here....need more of a swagger...my shits actin gay right now, wont load for me...ima try again quick...you shouldnt be broke ..ur jewish !!!delevery not bad...jus need more swagger or something...hooks not bad actualy...lol....maybe drink a beer or 2 b4 u spit...flows kinda basic and choppy @ points, lyrics not bad....not bad ass, but not bad... keep on keepin on, this is better then other shit i heard of urs |
thanks bro appreciate it
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pretty decent track man, did you make that beat?.. either was it wasnt to bad... you had some niice lyrics in there, it flowed really well... your good at makin' hooks man thats for sure, was a pretty good hook... overall the track wasnt bad at all homie, keep it up... lets do a collab soon my brotha....oh and btw stay the hell away from tha q he really thinks your good lookin'... haha
overall track - 7.5/10 |
thanks alot man appreciate it
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