"Toppin' Levies"...new banga...holla
 

http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox

^Click on "Toppin' Levies"

Beat: Swollen Drumz

Hook: Tha Q...lyrics provided here
Verses: 1-3, Q

Concept: I'm stuck on this braggadocio mode...this one is a banga, IMO



Holla


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Hook:

I drop heavy.........call me L-A weight loss
A hot Chevy...to the core I'm a vet, uh
I top levies, flood the game with steak sauce
For all the beef y'all bring y'all will eat raw


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240728
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241039

Aight yo what up Q..It's been a minute..let's break this down..

Beat is cool, not my type of thing you dig, I like you're delivery on this...and multis are cool but flow seems to fall off in some bits..

Hook is decent..

lyrics aren't too special..

keep doin u

Delivery is what I was focusin on with this track...




preciate feed



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Q, that Spit The Jag song is fuckin HAWT. Off the RV mixtape it's the only track that's stayed on my comp.

thank u bruh...b ut yo, the RV mixtape is out already?

And my song is on it?


hmm

Nah, theres a voting section that I got invited to contribute to.

^^oh...aiight


umm...could you give me a sneak peek of the voting process?




lol

ha, wierd name, beats illy man............

flows on, like the hook....good stuff man...got u some metas n shit in their eh ?

ha, good stuff man...that multi shit their is nutso, good stuff

This was pretty nice man. You had some wicked meta's in here. I really liked your rhyme scheme, the way you interpreted it to flow dope as fuck, ahh. Sweeet. You started spittin fast as hell to in the second verse, that was crazy. Cause you got every last syllable out of each word. Lyrically I liked what your sayin. Lol. It's some good shit. Mad me laugh a few times, too. Btw, the beats raw as fuck. I would'nt mind throwin some lyrics on a beat like that.

Overall, I liked it, alot. Definatly a song I'd add to my playlist. Keep it up bro.

Rtf,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241113
Thanks dawg.

i like the first verse....i like the hook...the second verse is too jammed up and crowded....the third verse is like a mix of the two....i like the song dont get me wrong, but its not as good as the other stuff youve been puttin out lately....up it a lil.....the beat is nice....i like it......you know what to do....wobble wobble