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Lay. 04-05-07 04:12 PM

Rizo*da*god vs Lay Fear
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-05-07 at 11:24 PM

Must drop verse in 432 minutes after check in.

System 04-05-07 04:13 PM

Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-07 04:13 PM.

System 04-05-07 04:18 PM

Rizo*da*God has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-07 04:18 PM.

Rizo*da*God 04-05-07 04:26 PM

Cum lay ya scary ass round here and receive sticthes
You just like ya motar kidd big body but lil britches
Smack da shit out cha like when bitches talk ___------and get out of line
!@$%$---====``my bad I feared for ya life after that so I got out of ryhme
Keep vote-N against me like the blacks did against bush
You lay fear cuz when you fuck you put critters in ya girls bush
You reside in college park but don’t have a credit of education
Ill ad my konflick wit proffessor and give you a technique demonstration
Im da god bitch so the fear you lay is easily over lapped
So after your shit ill lay my shit then you will be over crapped…

Lay. 04-05-07 04:34 PM

Ya name is out of place its flipped I'll jus mod this kiddo
MC vs MC but compared to him...I'm more like a God da Rizo.
I shot this widow, you smoke the mary jane? MJ,jus say it bastard
Girls shout !Don't !Stop til !You Get !Enough..cept they say it backwards
Ya hacker, you a clown with a disease for hitten keys, RG watchs herself
I searched your posts tryin to dig shit up on u...but was pilin u ontop yourself
He has 'Konflick' wit mc's, ya don't get enuf 'income', shout some shit
Battlin that^ n' me is different..but got the same 'outcome' bitch
:Lay Fear a btich, a rook, n rides dick a guy wit no fingers could whore me:
No pain No gain, ^wanted to feel insulted once in this battle.......
.........your verse jus didn't do it for me

Kirk 04-05-07 04:54 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

Alot of Rizo's shit weren't even punchlines. I was a decent battle but LF was more consistent with his punchlines, whereas you had one every know and then. LF's were also harder hitting. If I need to explain more so this doesn't get DQ'ed tell me.

Vote- LF

Lay. 04-06-07 01:36 PM

Bump, can we get some votes on this shit.

Lay. 04-08-07 12:25 PM

Lets get some votes on this.

Clokworx 04-16-07 01:47 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

easily. lay fear got this one. rizo your verse was mad wack for a couple of bars, then it started to make sense towards the end. just didnt have enough to come back. lay fear, dissed yourself, nice ending. vote goes to lay fear.

Popcorn. 04-16-07 03:31 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

Rizo da God:
Cum lay ya scary ass round here and receive sticthes
You just like ya motar kidd big body but lil britches
^No, just weak. 0/5
Smack da shit out cha like when bitches talk ___------and get out of line
!@$%$---====``my bad I feared for ya life after that so I got out of ryhme
^This was blah. .5/5
Keep vote-N against me like the blacks did against bush
You lay fear cuz when you fuck you put critters in ya girls bush
^Nope. .5/5
You reside in college park but don’t have a credit of education
Ill ad my konflick wit proffessor and give you a technique demonstration
^This was not good at all. .5/5
Im da god bitch so the fear you lay is easily over lapped
So after your shit ill lay my shit then you will be over crapped…
^Hrm, naw bro. 0/5


vs.


Lay Fear:
Ya name is out of place its flipped I'll jus mod this kiddo
MC vs MC but compared to him...I'm more like a God da Rizo.
^This was alright. 1.5/5
I shot this widow, you smoke the mary jane? MJ,jus say it bastard
Girls shout !Don't !Stop til !You Get !Enough..cept they say it backwards
^Heh, decent. 1.5/5
Ya hacker, you a clown with a disease for hitten keys, RG watchs herself
I searched your posts tryin to dig shit up on u...but was pilin u ontop yourself
^Blah. Nothing special about this. 1/5
He has 'Konflick' wit mc's, ya don't get enuf 'income', shout some shit
Battlin that^ n' me is different..but got the same 'outcome' bitch
^Decent bar here. Punch was a bit weak. 1.5/5
:Lay Fear a btich, a rook, n rides dick a guy wit no fingers could whore me:
No pain No gain, ^wanted to feel insulted once in this battle.......
.........your verse jus didn't do it for me
^Alright punchline here. 1.5/5


Overall a pretty weak battle. Lay Fear got my vote thou coming strong & w/ better punchlines. Both need work thou. Keep it up fellas.





Vote = LayFear

Lay. 04-16-07 08:26 PM

Thanks for the votes guys, much appreciated.

GKillaz05 04-17-07 08:03 AM

Voted For: Lay Fear

rizo:
nothin'

vs

Lay:
I shot this widow, you smoke the mary jane? MJ,jus say it bastard
Girls shout !Don't !Stop til !You Get !Enough..cept they say it backwards


overall:
this was a pretty weak battle but I have to give my vote to lay for havin' better lines.


rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=241446

Young Sin 04-17-07 11:10 AM

Voted For: Lay Fear

this verse came a lot harder nuff said it was a cat sweep in my eyes


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