Chris Cassius & XL - MC's
 

http://www.soundclick.com/artikulate
1st verse - XL
2nd verse - ME



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uppppinnnnnnnnnnn

word up i remember doin that scary movie shit with you when i first was startin off....lets see how much you upped ya game.......


you still forcin some shit for the sake of your lyrics, n its bringin ya flow down a bit....at the beg...you still got pretty ill punches....it was short...which was lame, bump that up anoter verse or two i was just gettin into it....

not much wrong here cept at the beg of your verse it was a bit forced....your gettin more comfortable on the mic tho....your quality is a bit better n what not....i like this, its a nice lil joint shoulda been longer tho.....


rtf on LIGHTS OUT

yo man wuz not feelin this joint at all.......ya flow wuz weird quality wasn't all there........but yo man i peep'd ya Triple Threat Pt 3. shit is hot.....ya verse wuz nice a lil choppy but ya delivery wuz nice on it.....just add more syllables to maintain a constant flow.....aiite fam......

pz

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