real hip hop
 

some quick shit i did on my feelings on rap/industry/music in general....

some real shit from the head....just shittin around.....some good quick shit...



real hip hop - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5240894





links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3159538

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241458

yo man feelin this.....ya flow wuz kinda hard to follow in the very beginnin.....but otha than that really feelin what ya have to say in this song....mad different from the usual music u put out....this track is pretty dope.....well Jay keep droppen...

pz

~1~

i thought you were in jail lol. anyway beats pretty coo nice vibe. your flow is pretty coo and the vocals sound clear, nice volume level on this. the lyrics are pretty real, for once you doin somin different. you kinda have a voice similar to Jin's lol, so might you be an asian? lol jk anyway the hook is straight forward of course but not a bad tracks dude, probably the best I've heard you.

j summers is in jail....not me....

beat is bangin

I was noddin my head at the start of this track

flow was tyte...reminded me of Tito

Hook is nice...But, you def. should have spit over it...After the sample said what it said, you could have said something like, "Pound for pound, I got the best sound around"...or w/e...You get my point...

very nice delivery

This is the best I've ever heard from you.


8.5/10


And, I'm pretty hard to please.



;)

decent message. but still the concept is played. i like the chorus and u got good flow so this is commercial enough and gets a decent message out that a audience would actually wanna hear. so decent track

word thanks...drop tracks n ill start returning some feed

yo rtf if ya want....http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241547

this is dope

im going to download this

word

Feeling the track, Flow is on point. The hook is dope love it. Multi's are great, i could bump this for sure. Great job. 8.5 outta 10.
idk y just that scratch of "Need something to rely on" loved that

word, beats dope, n u riding this shit very nicely guy....liking the energy n vibe u setting, rhyme scheme n multis r tight guy, nice catchy stuff...good delivery...

quality on da track is dope, tight track guy, def. keep it up guy...

this beat is ight but it seems too soft.........ur voice sounds like em but a lower pitch.....dont get me wrong ur lyrics is coo but im not feelin ur voice......you also kinda sound like tito..........overall this was ight