Week 3: K.Stubbs 1-1 .vs. Lay Fear 1-1
 

check g'luck dude.

I'll scar n shred you with no worries I'l leave you scared n whack
But I'll be remembered for rippin KS like I'm fuckin' tearin the map..

blah blah.. KS kansas for retards

Layin Fearless, shiiiit. against me, your scare won't ever control fright
I've layed so much fear in this kid, he's gon be impaired his whole life
I'll make you sweat @ the steak, I mean literally you aignt harder to Kill
Ya sigs right........you were a star, until i served you like a bar n grill

I'll scar n shred you with no worries I'l leave you scared n whack
But I'll be remembered for rippin KS like I'm fuckin' tearin the map..
^^ehh this shit was kinda wack.. too elementary
Ya best line was the one from my sig, n' I dont need a thin gun.
cuz 'kick boxing' ain't a sport.....its what we do after we put u in one
^^lmao this was dope tho.. best bar of the battle imo.

Vs.

Layin Fearless, shiiiit. against me, your scare won't ever control fright
I've layed so much fear in this kid, he's gon be impaired his whole life
^^wtf was this.. i expected better from the punch since the set up was aight.
I'll make you sweat @ the steak, I mean literally you aignt harder to Kill
Ya sigs right........you were a star, until i served you like a bar n grill
^^tsk tsk tsk.. sound like you was watching 8 mile when u posted this bar up.. that bar and grill line is played as fuck


gotta give it lay fear for not coming as played.. his 2nd bar was pretty dope too. in all honesty i expected stubbs to win this but lay took it

vote: Lay Fear

Lay:
I'll scar n shred you with no worries I'l leave you scared n whack
But I'll be remembered for rippin KS like I'm fuckin' tearin the map..
^Concept was ok. Nameplay seemed forced. Overall effect of the punch was not good. A bit weak son. 1/5
Ya best line was the one from my sig, n' I dont need a thin gun.
cuz 'kick boxing' ain't a sport.....its what we do after we put u in one
^Very clever concept here. It wasn't too much of a hard hitter but it did it's job. I was feeling this. The overall effect of this punch was good. 2.5/5


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Stubbs:
Layin Fearless, shiiiit. against me, your scare won't ever control fright
I've layed so much fear in this kid, he's gon be impaired his whole life
^Concept was nice. Effect of this punch was decent. 2/5
I'll make you sweat @ the steak, I mean literally you aignt harder to Kill
Ya sigs right........you were a star, until i served you like a bar n grill
^Concept was cool, but this is exactly how Em' said it on 8 Mile so you lose points for that. 0/5




Vote = Lay Fear

lay...first punch had an okay concept, could have been worded much better...but still ok i guess.

k....first punch was pretty weak...wasn't feelin it at all..it was an okay attempt at name play i suppose.but didn't connect right
2nd punch.....i don't really know what to say.your first line set up a direct quote from his sig...which is a direct quote from 8 mile...either way....your not going to impress anybody with using lines that arn't yours..regardless of what context it's meant to be in..

lay fear....your closer was the best line of the battle by far...i think it could have been worded slightly better...but to be honest..from what i've seen..this should be one of the top 5's of the week...

vote goes to lay fear for coming harder and connecting harder on both punches...sorry K.