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Civil. 04-22-07 08:19 AM

Week 3: one way 0-0 .vs. Shiest 0-0 .vs. Defined 0-0
 
Sunday: Battles are setup
Wednesday Night: one way 1 bar
Thursday Morning: Shiest 2 bars
Thursday Night: Defined 2 bars
Friday Night: one way 1 bar
Sunday Morning: Battles close

Feeding is allowed, and will be optional

Valiant 04-22-07 10:45 PM

How the fuck does a 3 way work?

Civil. 04-23-07 12:10 AM

^one way, quit. He won't be posting. and i didn't feel like edititing the title.
My bad, its just you and defined.

Valiant 04-23-07 02:30 AM

Your wife has Gonherrea, but her blowjobs answered my wishes
It's a good thing I didn't fuck her...
...You could say she was one of my near Mrs.

Defined 04-23-07 12:04 PM

We nasty drugies over here so yes, that bitch got it from me
so i hope there finally happy when you give the jury herpees
and theyll see, shiests has no hiest so obviously it wasnt fear,
t'was the REAL MAN that bought his One Way Ticket outta here

Valiant 04-26-07 12:57 AM

My Bad, I didn't Know You posted Your Verse. Lol. This is my first 1-2 battle G'luck mayne.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Defined
We nasty drugies over here so yes, that bitch got it from me


So you were conceived by a slut, this AIDS baby ain't passin me
For his Mouth has done been Cummed in my Hotels than Cassidy

Brandon Cee 04-26-07 01:09 AM

The first punch by sheist was funny, decent wordplay too...his second sucked and was badly worded.

Defined, both of your punches were terrible concepts and the wording on both was terrible.

v/Sheist

Defined 04-26-07 11:13 AM

lol...

up pls

Civil. 04-26-07 09:55 PM

Wow fuckin weak. Both seriously must improve by week 5.

Sheist-I honestly didn't like the concept of your first bar. The wording was ok, nothin too special at all, the overall punch however was weak. 2nd bar i didn't like much more towards a statement than a hit. Wording was weak..concept wack

Defined-There wasn't even a punch from you. You just basically had 4 lines that rhymed. I wasn't feelin either bar. Basic concepts were weak. nothin good at all. definately work on wording


v/Sheist


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