Somethng thats On MY Mind
 

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It's actually a rough draft to a song I'm writing called Lost Faith this is the first and verse to it....... please leave ya boy feed

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all this talk of PEELIN A THUG CAP?, let's go of the FEELIN THAT LOVE LACKS//
they push me in the MUD, BACK, it's that which turns my BLOOD BLACK//
the BOLDEST SHARK, I remember a house that was COLD AND DARK//
'in the game' 'it's the pain' that will MOLD YA HEART//
I'm CONCERNED WITH RESPECT, before I think about EARNIN A CHECK//
life must be a lesson, cuz what the fuck can you LEARN IN YA DEATH?//
I walked the wrong path at first, all the DIRT WAS A MESS//
on the run from myself, pourin gasoline behind me, BURNIN MY STEPS//
I acted tough, while secretly I sat in CHURCH AND I CRIED//
cuz I knew I had to be strong even though I was HURTIN INSIDE//
seen the SADDEST OF SIGHTS, thought I wouldn't LAST THROUGH THE NIGHT//
and seen things that make a fairy tale out of, the PASSION OF CHRIST//
why, it's cuz I got the PASSION TO FIGHT, ASKIN FOR LIFE//
as I pick up this pencil and this PAD AND I WRITE//
but sellin my soul is somethin I'm not willin to DO FOR THE WEALTH//
cuz how can I be true to the game if I ain't TRUE TO MYSELF?//
now I'm strong as a STONE, WALKIN and let what I've KNOWN TALK IT//
and went to climbin from the grave from buildin my OWN COFFIN//
and if you wanna take my path, then you WELCOME TO SEE//
and if the devil want me now, he's gonna have to make HELL COME TO ME!!//



n I know most of ya'll dont like tha whole typin in caps thing but hell just read it ... it's not that big of a deal

Its was iight still...Nice concept and story...Try Getting rid of the "//" tho it makes you look like a n00b. If you interested in making a collabo holla @ me...Im out ~1~

Iight We Can Collab.... just hit me up in a message and let me know tha concept

good written...i see u like doing multis alot....keep doing what u do...

life must be a lesson, cuz what the fuck can you LEARN IN YA DEATH?//

^^^^^ fav line


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