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The Heckler vs Oz™
6 barz max nd da rest of da rules u said along with house rules
Oz™ :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 04-28-07 at 09:05 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Oz™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-07 11:21 AM.
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The Heckler has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-28-07 04:32 PM.
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Calculation equations, to get the voters persuasion.. While gunnin down any challenge like school boy asians.. It's another newb to battle, but whats there to expect.. Cus i asked the mods about u, nd dey was like wat the heck?.. Im runnin away wit dis battle, its turnin into a meet.. Cus your chances dont exist like a repeat from the heat.. Its a lil to much for him, Heck couldnt handle the job.. So just sit and let it soak in like wettin cotton swabs.. The punches deliver, your heart'll get ripped like tearin x-ray pictures.. Nd Heck wont be able to test a man/testament like throwin away scriptures.. G'Luck... :thumbup: |
Got texts hotter than hell’s fate, you spit hoping for a stale mate
My bars sell rate is constant like your name being flipped into jailbait Getting your cells raped like you was born at an AIDS convention For your condition they got medical tourneys and you won’t evade contention Got blades ripping your insides this little fucker should’ve learned sooner My hits will produce tumors the type that’ll make you Seau like Junior (say ouch) This loser speculates over others successes, just tell foes your jealous When it comes to practicing wackness, this bitch gets Over Zealous Im hood reckless and chosen for bling when its straight gutter my slogans bring Take a path to the projects I’ll fit you in one of those fence cutter openings A hopeless thing how you spit your script got me on the edge of my seat I was hanging over the armrest after I had fallen asleep *His yahoo name is Miami JR.= Junior Seau is a linebacker from the Dolphins |
Any voters around, just a minute of your time is all.
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This battle is starting to get old need some votes here
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Votes pplz...this shit IS getting to old
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How does a thread get 155 views wit no votes?
I know my spit was weak but damn lol. |
Voted For: Oz™
Oz: The punches deliver, your heart'll get ripped like tearin x-ray pictures.. Nd Heck wont be able to test a man/testament like throwin away scriptures.. vs Heckler: nothin' RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=241808 |
Still uppin for votes, any judges out there in rapverse land?
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This was feedback posted for Oz™
Got texts hotter than hell’s fate, you spit hoping for a stale mate
My bars sell rate is constant like your name being flipped into jailbait decent start... Getting your cells raped like you was born at an AIDS convention For your condition they got medical tourneys and you won’t evade contention aight BUT could off flip tis better thou.. Got blades ripping your insides this little fucker should’ve learned sooner My hits will produce tumors the type that’ll make you Seau like Junior (say ouch) decent This loser speculates over others successes, just tell foes your jealous When it comes to practicing wackness, this bitch gets Over Zealous nah i aint feeling this... Im hood reckless and chosen for bling when its straight gutter my slogans bring Take a path to the projects I’ll fit you in one of those fence cutter openings NICE... A hopeless thing how you spit your script got me on the edge of my seat I was hanging over the armrest after I had fallen asleep decent ending.. couple few good punches, decent flow not bad.. Calculation equations, to get the voters persuasion.. While gunnin down any challenge like school boy asians.. ha nice start... It's another newb to battle, but whats there to expect.. Cus i asked the mods about u, nd dey was like wat the heck?.. nah.. Im runnin away wit dis battle, its turnin into a meet.. Cus your chances dont exist like a repeat from the heat.. decent... Its a lil to much for him, Heck couldnt handle the job.. So just sit and let it soak in like wettin cotton swabs.. HA NICE... feeling this...lol...danm... The punches deliver, your heart'll get ripped like tearin x-ray pictures.. Nd Heck wont be able to test a man/testament like throwin away scriptures.. decent word-play and punch... your verse had some GOOD punches i was feeling, a bit of wordplay and decent flow and a tad bit of multis... you had more of an all around verse... this one was a hard choise but after re-readin OZ DEF WON WIT HARDER hiting punches.... ^^sorry for that mykey-bored is fuckin up alot... |
i couldnt vote since the post count was set to 300 but can ya return the favor and vote in any of my battles plez thanks...
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Voted For: The Heckler
It's another newb to battle, but whats there to expect.. Cus i asked the mods about u, nd dey was like wat the heck?.. vs. Got blades ripping your insides this little fucker should’ve learned sooner My hits will produce tumors the type that’ll make you Seau like Junior even though i got 1 quotable from each verse, this still in my eyes was a one sided battle. Oz your structure made it so blah and not fun to read..yeah it looked nice with the centering and small font..but it really had no flow or many effective punches. no hate man just tryna help you out. and the heckler...your flow was much better and rhymed good...flow was fine..you had 1 punch that was quotable..and that was more stronger than your opponents quotable...just work on how you set up ur verse and you'll be fine..and try to incorporate more punches...even though you still got the w rtf please v/the heckler |
This was feedback posted for The Heckler
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