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Valiant 04-27-07 01:19 PM

Champion Feat. Ransum
 
[Shiest]
I get change, get money get paper get honeys...
Got Rich, Got Throwed, Got Honeys from the money
Big Trucks, Big Bucks, Big Checks, With a clutch
With snub? from above? From a what? From the Dutch
...So I say...
It's mission time: Reload it, cock it, and let it BANG!...
Then we let it clock, let it rock like chea! yea! yea! yea!
Fo'real, Don't act like a hero or the bullets will Slang
leaving all the collisuem screaming Yea! yea! yea! yea!


Shiest (chorus)
Champion! you Fucks Can't Touch me
I am Holy Field with the Belt...
...So you fucks Can't Touch me
I am Conan with the snub...
So Your Swords can't Drop me
I can be an Action Star just like Rocky...


[Ransum]
Bullets squirt at spleens till they put a pic of it on "believe it or not"
squeezing a glock till niggas talk funny like they got helium gut's....
you seen me sluts?, i wet ya acc up from back to front
and put the pump in ya mouth like a asthma pump...
then cop'll come, then they throu up they lunch
an take it to the roof an see who wanna jump....
its ransum dummys i aint looking for knockladge
but im smart enough to leave to asian alone....
...every since they shot up the college.... mother fuckahs

im paying for my food next time..... hahahahaha...


Shiest (chorus)
Champion! you Fucks Can't Touch me
I am Holy Field with the Belt...
...So you fucks Can't Touch me
I am Conan with the snub...
So Your Swords can't Drop me
I can be an Action Star just like Rocky...


[Shiest]
Props to the niggas, Props to the Don...
Props to the body dumped on the front lawns
Props to the nigga with the 4-5 or the semi
Yes the semis really heavy...
...Thats fo'sheezy now Get ready
To get more head on your dick then Somalians
Big Brains, Big Strain as my nuts start Bustin' in.
I'll make the Daisy go, the Daisy in the heat of Drama
Bullets rhythm hard...
...To make your heart do the fucking La Bamba.

Valiant 04-27-07 01:31 PM

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163083

Young Sin 04-27-07 02:32 PM

this was iight... not my type... unless it's straight off top... but it flowed nicely over tha beat I was listenin to so fuck it stay up n get at me

KM 04-28-07 02:37 PM

this was nice i like the whole concept and writtens....but it was too short to me maybe one or two more verses would have made it better....good job though ~1~

Ransum 05-01-07 09:27 AM

thanks for the feed back ya....

it was off-top....

but ya know we def gonna do another collabo in the future...

nice verse big up shiest for holding it down....

Young Kidd (LM) 05-02-07 10:41 AM

Eh...it had some nice potential... iliked the beggining flow but afterwards it kinda fell off... its like you quit trying at one point and the choruse could be worked on... its a hoook yea but its kinda repetative even for that...like just the whole feeling is like your just saying it...also work on a little more complexity..i know you can only add so much to certain things but you know put a little wordplay and such...good stuff...stay up..


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