laxdnota vs GKillaz05
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


I KNOW RAP SO IF U BITE IMA CATCH IT AND REPORT U!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-10-07 at 01:42 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

laxdnota has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-07 01:44 PM.

Im Lines R Real, Ill Eat U Up Like A #9 Burger King Meal, Bacon Cheeseburger, Im The Owner, Call Me The Burgler, Ur Like A Retard, God Made A Mistake Makin U, And Now Look Whos Rapin U, Back To The Paper, Keep It On Ur Side, Do Good, Otherwise Ull Show Up In A Harbor On The Tide, I Got The Realest, So For The Moment, Enjoy The Ride, Goodnight.

MY lines R REAL. my bad.

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-07-07 03:55 PM.

ok, so you just set this battle up for no reason?... I guess I can key something up quick...
goodluck...

I'll snap you quick like a photo...
...Ya your raps are lo-co'z...
Lax's verse always come up short like frodo...
And im the lord of da rap ring, you fold like a napkin...
When your rappin' your never bold even when your cap'n...
If you would have seen my verse first you would back down...
Got Lax like "oh wow, everyones goin' to think im wack now"...
Infact now I'm just chillin' lettin' yall know the facts...
We must be runnin' laps and I passed you so I just re-lax....
Callin' me out for no reason, well I guess I'll take a free win...
RV Community Complainents is the only place I expect to see him...

wow at me wastin a fuckin' verse for this shit...... Knew if some noob just sets up a random battle you shouldnt accept it. oh well... lets get some votes quick time!!

This was feedback posted for laxdnota
 

hahahahahahahahahaha.............................. .

thats good guy, how come ur on here? dude be a ghostwriter send ur shit in, im a rookie at writing ive only been writing for like 2 months. give it to some low place with no talent and sweep them off their feet. guy get a deal.

Voted For: GKillaz05

Whats uppp G,
ez battle huh?..vote goes to G for not suckin at life n not havin the shittiest text verse I have seen on the site..u suck lax, don't u c how everybody else texts? ur shit wasn't even close..

v/ Killa

like i said... retard... ima rookie, one of the best r teachin me... mystic. hes one of my friends best friends and hes amazing at verses. good game tho. peace.

Voted For: GKillaz05

obviously the winner....lax was fuckin wack, i dont think he know what he was talking about for real...i mean "show up in the harbor on a tide" i mean come on dog, thats fuckin stupid.
Gkillaz my manz, is was hot when u said "GOT LAX LIKE "OH WOW, EVERYONES GOIN' TO THINK IM WACK NOW"

Voted For: GKillaz05

u'r verse was a horrible read so i tryed to brake it up the best i can....

Im Lines R Real,
Ill Eat U Up Like A #9 Burger King Meal /
im guess'iny ou ment MY insted of IM.... weak start thou..

Bacon Cheeseburger,
Im The Owner, Call Me The Burgler
you make no fucking sense kid...

Ur Like A Retard, God Made A Mistake Makin U
And Now Look Whos Rapin U
1st line had potential next weak as fuck...

Back To The Paper, Keep It On Ur Side, Do Good, Otherwise Ull Show Up In A Harbor On The Tide, I Got The Realest, So For The Moment, Enjoy The Ride, Goodnight.

had potential, but led to noting....


I'll snap you quick like a photo...
...Ya your raps are lo-co'z...
Lax's verse always come up short like frodo...
decent start... and so far more then enough to win...

And im the lord of da rap ring, you fold like a napkin...
When your rappin' your never bold even when your cap'n...
preety good punch here... YOU WON..

If you would have seen my verse first you would back down...
Got Lax like "oh wow, everyones goin' to think im wack now"...
weak...
Infact now I'm just chillin' lettin' yall know the facts...
We must be runnin' laps and I passed you so I just re-lax....
below average...
Callin' me out for no reason, well I guess I'll take a free win...
RV Community Complainents is the only place I expect to see him...
true true .... decent ending...

well as you know you did way more then enough to win this....

my 1st day onm here...... i dont do this normally...... im just starting so gimme some credit for trying against some one good jeeez. mystisc. is teaching me, hes sick and one of my friends best friends, so ill get better over time i learn quickly, but ya way to shit on me. sry im a noob. mystic is nasty and im learning fomr him so cool down and watch me get ahead

im not a text head dnota? im topical..but thanks? ...