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laxdnota vs GKillaz05
Battle Rules:
4-6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Using old lines GKillaz05 starts off Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-11-07 at 10:19 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle win |
laxdnota has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 10:24 AM.
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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 03:41 PM.
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wow, I cannot belive that you want another ass kickin', I guess I cannot back down to another free win... haha
Keystyle somethin' up real quick...(since I wasted a good verse on your ass last time) Dudes whack fo' real only thing that Dnota Lax is skill... Wouldnt be able to drop shit, even wit a laxative pill... I'll only tell you this one time, I can beat ya wit played linez... Check our last battle... Whose verse won?... Even your boy Mystic's said mine... At dissin' your blind, walk right out of the RV doorz... Like harvey stores... If you drop somethin' hot its most definitely not yours... iiight let the votes begin, and you dont need to inform me on how weak my verse is, I already know... thankz and have a fun time voting. |
ok, I just dropped.. goodluck dude.. lets see what you and mystic's can put together.. haha
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call me krayzie... cuz my life isnt any but an "everyday thang" i know "it's all real" so "c-ya at the crossroads" call me "Krayzie Jackson"
u take in more shit than a public toilet so homie ur sig proves... u really r the shit... call me a toothbrush... i be wakin up in ur bitches mouth every morning with plenty of toothpaste. |
guy u went over 6 lines.... way to break the rules... lmao
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Voted For: GKillaz05
u take in more shit than a public toilet so homie ur sig proves... u really r the shit... decent attempt at personal punch this was the best bar i've seen from you so far..... vs Dudes whack fo' real only thing that Dnota Lax is skill... Wouldnt be able to drop shit, even wit a laxative pill... this won the battle .... yet another cheap win but none the less its a wina nd he wanted to battle you its not like you was bully'in a herb newbie or something so i aint mad at you gkillaz.... |
He Broke The Rules. He Went Over The Maximum Amount Of Bars!!!!!
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I only see six barz there, but since you already admitted you were an amature, I guess I will refrain from callin' you a dumbass.
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1...Dudes whack fo' real only thing that Dnota Lax is skill...
2...Wouldnt be able to drop shit, even wit a laxative pill... 3...I'll only tell you this one time, I can beat ya wit played linez... 4...Check our last battle... 5...Whose verse won?... Even your boy Mystic's said mine... 6...At dissin' your blind, walk right out of the RV doorz... 7....Like harvey stores... 8.............If you drop somethin' hot its most definitely not yours... im pretty sure thats 8 |
Voted For: GKillaz05
v/gkillaz05-come on man..he challenged me to a second battle i said no..1 time is enough...u had 1 cool bar..of course its played....but had good punches derek-you needa incorporate rhymes man..u cant just throw out the punches...u need to have a setup line with it...you came more creative..but left out the most important aprt lol...later v/gkillaz |
derek he only had 6 lines, his structure style is just set up that way bud..chillll
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This was feedback posted for laxdnota
this was one of the worst raps ive eva hurd in my life you suck like bad seriously you need to etha practice alot more or fukin quit
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lets get some more votes to end this battle.................
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