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Faime S. Quotez vs Lay Fear
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Faime S. Quotez has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 04:25 PM.
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Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 05:07 PM.
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ahh I'm suprised you set this up..lolz..
g'luck., ya need it |
No need for two days...
Yo.. Locations irrelevent dude, u tryin to harm me?..I doubt ya style cuz if this guy reppin Cinn.,..well I guess I'm straight out the bible check his sig.., na my punches? hes barin some, this geeks a laugh not common to quote yourself first...but embarrassin to be the last! as long as were on the topic..check this..verse is like paintin with ink cuz if knowledge is all the power of existence...then why ain't he extinct? lolz..this guys whack, played, weak, unoriginal..so I'll be at fault wit a gun n' counterattack isn't ya tactic..jus our technique for assualtin you wit one this is fun for me..ya goin for 3-2?...well I'll leave ya battered in flandered cuz if he claimin he's a famous quote...then he jus shattered my standards |
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Here's how you can tell Fear says whack stuff in his rhymes even HE's surprised someone wastes their time crushin' his lines! You hyped cuz you got 4 wins? But they were weak farts, check you steppin' to a Big Dog now.. and u aint got a deep bark yet I'm smotherin' him with skills, but I can also get 'em buried so I'll give 'em his space.. 6 feet under the ground in a cemetary How else can I say this? Girls dont let you spray thru their legs. they only 'fuckin Lay on the bed'...when they fuckin' lay on the bed! He wasn't known here, RV didn't even know this kid rhymed but I just changed all that... now, you're known as the dude Quotez killed in 10 lines! Just enough to beat 'em. |
lolz clok worx was alot better than u in text bud, n atleast I didn't loose to someone who was whack.
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Voted For: Lay Fear
Here's how you can tell Fear says whack stuff in his rhymes even HE's surprised someone wastes their time crushin' his lines! ok You hyped cuz you got 4 wins? But they were weak farts, check you steppin' to a Big Dog now.. and u aint got a deep bark yet lightly below average preety weak honestly.. I'm smotherin' him with skills, but I can also get 'em buried so I'll give 'em his space.. 6 feet under the ground in a cemetary ok... How else can I say this? Girls dont let you spray thru their legs. they only 'fuckin Lay on the bed'...when they fuckin' lay on the bed! nah i aint feeling this man... He wasn't known here, RV didn't even know this kid rhymed but I just changed all that... now, you're known as the dude Quotez killed in 10 lines! not a good ending either... man ya verse had alot of simple bars noting to creative and no punches really either you had a basic flow and thats sum ya verse up... Yo.. Locations irrelevent dude, u tryin to harm me?..I doubt ya style cuz if this guy reppin Cinn.,..well I guess I'm straight out the bible at first i aint get it then i re-read it decent word-play.. check his sig.., na my punches? hes barin some, this geeks a laugh not common to quote yourself first...but embarrassin to be the last! slightly below average... as long as were on the topic..check this..verse is like paintin with ink cuz if knowledge is all the power of existence...then why ain't he extinct? aight.. lolz..this guys whack, played, weak, unoriginal..so I'll be at fault wit a gun n' counterattack isn't ya tactic..jus our technique for assualtin you wit one aight... this is fun for me..ya goin for 3-2?...well I'll leave ya battered in flandered cuz if he claimin he's a famous quote...then he jus shattered my standards im guess'in you probley ment HE's not My but decent ending... your verse had more creativeness a bit of word-play some attemps at decent punches flow was decent you def was trying more with everything and not a bad verse besides like a bar or 2 i thought you aint need... decent verse thou... vote lay fear by far from more attemps at decent punches and word-play... |
Voted For: Lay Fear
Here's how you can tell Fear says whack stuff in his rhymes even HE's surprised someone wastes their time crushin' his lines! He wasn't known here, RV didn't even know this kid rhymed but I just changed all that... now, you're known as the dude Quotez killed in 10 lines! vs. Locations irrelevent dude, u tryin to harm me?..I doubt ya style cuz if this guy reppin Cinn.,..well I guess I'm straight out the bible as long as were on the topic..check this..verse is like paintin with ink cuz if knowledge is all the power of existence...then why ain't he extinct? lolz..this guys whack, played, weak, unoriginal..so I'll be at fault wit a gun n' counterattack isn't ya tactic..jus our technique for assualtin you wit one faime-you shouldnt have taken this with a breez, should always preform your best, never know when somebody is going to out preform you man...well you had a decent verse towards a newb...problem being this newb can actually put together a verse man...i know u can do better... lay fear-nice verse had some funny bars in there...good introduction to the site...pretty much just better overall verse.. v/lay fear return the favor ..thanks |
Thanks for the votes.
uppin... |
rtf please, thanks.....................................
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This was feedback posted for Faime S. Quotez
i know im sposed to have like 200 fukin posts to vote but thats irrelevant this is jus my opion it was a good battle no on won by a long shot or anything but i give this to qoute
the reason is for the way he opened got my attention then he fell off for a seconed but had the cemetary line which was good and the whole wordplay and comical aspect of the fukin lay on the bed... i judt thought thay lay came really soft nothing really hit hard punches were original but diddnt hit hard at all to me ! |
Voted For: Lay Fear
lay fear: Locations irrelevent dude, u tryin to harm me?..I doubt ya style cuz if this guy reppin Cinn.,..well I guess I'm straight out the bible 5/10 - decent opener. check his sig.., na my punches? hes barin some, this geeks a laugh not common to quote yourself first...but embarrassin to be the last! 3/10 - meh. as long as were on the topic..check this..verse is like paintin with ink cuz if knowledge is all the power of existence...then why ain't he extinct? 4/10 - decent. lolz..this guys whack, played, weak, unoriginal..so I'll be at fault wit a gun n' counterattack isn't ya tactic..jus our technique for assualtin you wit one 2/10 - nah. this is fun for me..ya goin for 3-2?...well I'll leave ya battered in flandered cuz if he claimin he's a famous quote...then he jus shattered my standards 6/10 - niice closer. 20/50 faime: Here's how you can tell Fear says whack stuff in his rhymes even HE's surprised someone wastes their time crushin' his lines! 4/10 - meh opener. You hyped cuz you got 4 wins? But they were weak farts, check you steppin' to a Big Dog now.. and u aint got a deep bark yet 3/10 - nah. I'm smotherin' him with skills, but I can also get 'em buried so I'll give 'em his space.. 6 feet under the ground in a cemetary 2/10 - played. How else can I say this? Girls dont let you spray thru their legs. they only 'fuckin Lay on the bed'...when they fuckin' lay on the bed! 3/10 - hmm... He wasn't known here, RV didn't even know this kid rhymed but I just changed all that... now, you're known as the dude Quotez killed in 10 lines! 4/10 - decent closer. 16/50 OVERALL: lay had the better verse, he gets the vote. the other dude had played lines, didnt seem like he wanted to take the win here. rtf in one of my battles if ya get the time. |
yo..lets get some votes n get this closed..uppin....................
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Voted For: Lay Fear
as long as were on the topic..check this..verse is like paintin with ink cuz if knowledge is all the power of existence...then why ain't he extinct? lolz..this guys whack, played, weak, unoriginal..so I'll be at fault wit a gun n' counterattack isn't ya tactic..jus our technique for assualtin you wit one vs nothing.. bascially Lay Fear wins |
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