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laxdnota vs Mystic.
Battle Rules:
6 - 14 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 tko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-08-07 at 10:25 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Mystic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 07:10 PM.
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laxdnota has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 07:26 PM.
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^check that link before you read will someone please tell me who the fuck laxdnota is comin on this site like he's gonna smash the olda kids .... Lax stays on websites and aim all day ...that just aint right I knew you was on a downfall wen u made myspace ya life You rap to impress m&m, u claim to have met kim n the family Then i got to ur house... ........green brown red?? The fucka only sent you the candy You fuckin suck your raps are horrible reading them is hard its like your retarded....well you deff. look the part.. haha seriously whose that lil boy you just lookin to get action he's ur 23rd case mj they call you laxdnota jackson this should be enough to end his life? |
ur lines r sick i give u that
but mine'll drop u like a $50 sack ur rhymes make sense but i could buy them for 50 cents like the artist but his art is worth more urs so u didnt hafta hint ur price im a rookie and not too good but id buy u out with a roll of a dice so u can call me back in business and ur just senseless and cents less than mine its tha end of this rhyme n crazier than ur "life of chryme" peace out rest ur lines sit back and feel my wrath |
uppin for some votes, lets get them rolling in,,,,,
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mine sucked. i got better tho. i got the structure but need more punchlines and better ones.
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Voted For: Mystic.
and ur just senseless and cents less than mine its tha end of this rhyme n crazier than ur "life of chryme vs You rap to impress m&m, u claim to have met kim n the family Then i got to ur house... ........green brown red?? The fucka only sent you the candy mystic got this hands down no comp at all... this kid need alot of work to be done before he can be consider a contender for anyone at all.... i mean im not hate'in im just saying this so that u look at ya verse look at mystic and gkillaz mines in our battle and just learn something from it like how to create a punchline alone with a punchline set upa nd multis ECT... you'll get the point after a while just research the battler before u battle them to see if you stand a chance kid.... mystic no need to tell you that this verse was weak coming from you... but by far more then enuff to take him oout... |
Voted For: Mystic.
laxdnota: nothin' man.. you need more practice.. although that verse was better then any of you other verses. vs. Mystic: You fuckin suck your raps are horrible reading them is hard its like your retarded....well you deff. look the part.. your verse was nothin' special, but im guessin' you knew you didnt need much. Retrun the Fav on one of my battles in front line. |
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Voted For: Mystic.
ur lines r sick i give u that but mine'll drop u like a $50 sack flow isn’t perfect with such small lines, which is bad, and punch is played ur rhymes make sense but i could buy them for 50 cents WTF? Gtfoh this sucks like the artist but his art is worth more urs …no so u didnt hafta hint ur price im a rookie and not too good but id buy u out with a roll of a dice wtf? Are u even serious? so u can call me back in business were the fuck is this spose to be and ur just senseless and cents less than mine its tha end of this rhyme n crazier than ur "life of chryme" No, wtf are u talking about? peace out rest ur lines sit back and feel my wrath Ummm forget another line? HardHittingBars-0 DecentBars-0 ShittyBars-7 Points- (-7) ^check that link before you read lmao @ pic will someone please tell me who the fuck laxdnota is comin on this site like he's gonna smash the olda kids .... Lax stays on websites and aim all day ...that just aint right I knew you was on a downfall wen u made myspace ya life flow isn’t good…don’t like the bar You rap to impress m&m, u claim to have met kim n the family Then i got to ur house... ........green brown red?? The fucka only sent you the candy Rhyme scheme was OFF…FA/MI/LY and CAN/DY don’t match up syllable wise.. You fuckin suck your raps are horrible reading them is hard its like your retarded....well you deff. look the part.. LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! this bar is fucking jokes yo, nice punch haha seriously whose that lil boy you just lookin to get action he's ur 23rd case mj they call you laxdnota jackson meh…decent at best this should be enough to end his life? HardHittingBars-1 DecentBars-1 ShittyBars-2 Points-1 Overall: Best use of bars-M Punches-M Ahhh Fuck it, Everything-M Vote-This was a blowout, mystic wins, was that other guy foreal? If so….dammmm |
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